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Hello and welcome to my little presentation about the perhaps famous mouse in the world and the icon of the world disney company mickey mous.
First of all i will start with some facts about mickey. Mickey mouse is a animation and cartoon character which was created by Walt Disney and Ub Iwerks. He is 4 feet tall that´s about 120 cm and he weight 23 pounds that´s about 11.5 kg . His birthday is the 18.nov.1928. Now i come to the historie of mickey mous .The historie of mickey starts in the 20 ´s where there have been predecessors of him which resembled him not only externally but also in character like oswald the lucky rabbit . Here you can see a picture of oswald but only at the end of 20 during a long train ride between New York and Hollywood had Walt Disney, the then little-known artists and designers, the idea for the little mouse with big black ears. The name Mickey Mouse was invented by Liliane, the wife of Walt Disney primary mickey mouse should named mortimer mouse but Liliane could persuade her husband to named his new character mickey. His frist aperance mickey had in the silent film plane crazy which was shown only a closed company. Here you can see a poster of plane crazy. But only by the sound film ,, steamboat willi ,, witch celebrated his primiere on 18.nov.1928 mickey mous became famous That is the reason why people celebrate on this day his birthday. Now I will show you a small excerpt from the film ,, steamboat willie ,,. the first time mickey spoke was in the movie ,, the karneval kid ,, his first words were ,,hot dog,, Walt Disney himself lent mickey for this his voice .In 1930 mickey got his dog pluto The funny orange yellow quadrupeds with the delicate scent is an unusual figure in the Disney empire, because he - is not anthropomorphized - in contrast to other figures.Till 1935 the mickey mouse cartoons were only in black and white. The first timie mickey were colured was in the movie ,, the band concert ,, .from that moment all micky cartoons were produce colured.to his 50 anniversary became mikey at the first cartoon-charakter a star of the walk of fame.
Today mickey is one of the famous disney charakter in the world and people in over 30 cauntris love him. Thats was my little prentation and thank you for listening.
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