Kann mir jemand seine Meinung zu diesem englischen kurzen Text den ich geschrieben habe schreiben?
Don't you lie in your bed sometimes, frightened, feeling like there's not enough air to keep you alive, your chest heavy like it's iron and you start to breathe faster and faster, just because the world scares the shit out of you? It's because of all the violence, people killing each other, pointless wars, with soldiers who don't even _know_ why they're against Iraq, Iran, Israel, Afghanistan, Ghaza, or a hundred of other nations. It's because of hunger in for example Côte d'Ivoire while other Countries throw away _more than half_ of all their groceries, because they think eating something on the go instead of the _already bought_ food is so much easier. It's because people we see everyday downtown do not have a house, a job, a warm meal everyday, access to a hot shower at least once a week and most importantly, they do not have access to medical care. And everything people do is giving them a sad smile, while they walk away. If it's coincidentally in their hand, maybe they give them _one single pence_. We all are afraid it's our fate too. It's because of our society. There's no help for lost teenagers like we are. We live with all these fears, alone with our minds and many of us die without getting the answers for all of our _untold questions_. I know our fear is real and justifiable. But why can't we think again and realize, that all the people I mentioned above are a lot poorer than we will ever be, so why can't we stop crying, and start going out to fight against all the injustice, in our city, country, earth, world?