Hallo zusammen, schreibe bald meine Englisch Klausur und darf die auf gar keinen Fall verhauen !!! Es geht um das Thema "Comment schreiben". Ich habe hier mal einen geschrieben. Könntet ihr mal sagen was gut und schlecht daran ist und ob iregendwas von der Grammatik oder so falsch ist ? Danke schonmal :)
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Pro: prepare for later Con: limited to one shop improve learning some may not want to wear a school uniform all one organization no bullying
Order: 1. prepare for later 2. improve learning 4. limited to one shop 5. some may not want to wear a school uniform 6. no bullying ´cause all are one organization
What´s the Point of school uniform? The text “What´s the point of school uniform?” published in the online edition of “The Guardian” on 03.08.2013. The Author is unknown and the text is about some advantages and disadvantages of wearing a school uniform. In the following I will explain why I am for wearing a school uniform.
According to Howlett: “Uniforms help students to prepare for when they leave school and may have to dress smartly or wear a uniform.”(10-11). In my opinion this is a very good reason for wearing a school uniform because later you need to dress smartly in many jobs. For many it is difficult to dress smartly in their later jobs. If you already wear a school uniform you do not have this problem.
Furthermore some people believe that school uniform can improve learning. I totally agree with this, because you reduce distraction and focus on schoolwork. Also it makes classroom a more serious environment, so the students can focus better on their work.
On the other hand there are some disadvantages for wearing a school uniform.
In my opinion the biggest problem with school uniforms are that you are most of the time limited to one shop. If nothing in the shop fits you you can get struggle with it.
Another big point against wearing a school uniform is that some students may not want to wear a school uniform. Especially teenagers want to show their attitude and express themselves by dressing in an individual style.
The main reason why I am for wearing a school uniform is that nobody gets excluded for how he or she look. Because all look the same and nobody can make fun about others for how they look. Also wearing a school uniform gives a feeling of being a part of an organization. This is important for students with low feeling of self-worth because they feel more comfortable.
Weighing the pros and cons I came to the conclusion that I would like to introduce school uniform because the advantage are stronger than the disadvantage and school uniforms have a very big avail for the most students.**