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When my best friend was 18, he went out on a blind date. He dates took her to a Nobel restaurant, and although he was nice enough, she just wasn't into him. Halfway through the meal she was so bored that she was already thinking of excuses so that she could leave early. The waiter could tell she was bored and kept smiling and winking at her.
While my best friend date was in the restroom, the waiter approached her and started asking her if she was OK. She explained that she was on a blind date, but she wasn't having much fun. It turned out that the waiter was just about to get off work. He offered to give her a ride home if she waited another twenty minutes.
She considered it and was tempted to say yes, but just then my boyfriend came back from the restroom. She shook her head, smiled at the waiter and told him, "No thanks".
Suddenly she changed her mind about my boyfriend and became interested in him after all. My best friend and her date finished their meals, and he drove her home.