Verbesserung meiner Englisch Referat?
Könnt ihr bitte mein Referat auf die Rechtschreibung korrigieren? Ihr dürft natürlich auf noch etwas dazuschreiben wenn irgendwas fehlt. Danke. Mahatma Gandhi: The freedom fighter Mahatma Gandhi came on the 2nd October, 1869 as a Mohandas Karamchand Ghandi in India to the world. At the age of 13 years he was married with Kasturbai Narkanji. From this marriage there appeared 4 sons. The family of Mohandas belonged to the better society(company) of the country(land), so that he(it) had the possibility to graduate from 1888 to 1891 law studies in London. After the study he went back to India. He traveled to South Africa to take a case. When to him became clear, how much the Indian immigrants were suppressed in South Africa, he(it) began his(its) battle free of authority for the discriminated. In a demonstration, the demonstrators were attacked by the British. Many were seriously injured and killed. Overall, in this attack more than 300 people were killed. Gandhi got closer to his aim to reach the Indian independence in 1920. He became a member in the Indian national congress. In 1930 in order to help free India from British control, Mahatma Gandhi proposed a non-violent march protesting the British Salt Tax, continuing Gandhi's pleas for civil disobedience. The Salt Tax essentially made it illegal to sell or produce salt. The people protested in a 385 kilometer long march against the salt taxes. Again the police officers reacted violent and many people were hurt. But he had reached the abolition of the salt taxes. With peace negotiations in 1931 in London it came to no arrangement. Gandhi could not still put through the independence of his state. In 1932 and 1933 there were many demonstrations. During the demonstrations many persons were hurt and were killed. During two years to carry out tried Mahatma Gandhi massive pressure on the British in which he demanded the independence of India. In 1947 he reached his aim: India was divided in Pakistan and India and was explained for independently. 30th January, 1948: Mohandas Karamchand Gandhi was murdered by a religious fanatic. He exerted himself always free of authority for the independence of his country. He fought peacefully for the rights of his countrymen and therefore he was arrested for 8 years. At last he reached his aim.
The freedom fighter Mahatma Gandhi came on the 2nd October, 1869 as a
Mohandas Karamchand Ghandi in India to the world (Ausdruck, Ort vor Zeit). At the age of 13 (---) he was married with (Ausdruck) Kasturbai Narkanji. From this marriage there appeared (Wort) 4 sons. The family of Mohandas
(Grammatik) belonged to the better society of the country, so that he had the
possibility to graduate (Wort) from 1888 to 1891 law studies in London (Ort vor Zeit).
After the study (Ausdruck) he went back to India. He traveled to South Africa to take a case (Ausdruck). When to him became clear, how much the Indian immigrants were
An dieser Stelle breche ich ab, denn es sind so viele Ausdrucks-, Wort-, Satzstellungs-, Grammatikfehler usw. enthalten, dass der komplette Text überarbeitet werden muss.
Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe bis dahin nichts übersehen.
Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com,
für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de - und Finger weg vom Google Übelsetzer und seinen tr.tteligen Kollegen!
Das klingt nach einer Google Übersetzung, an der Du keine weiteren Verbesserungen selbst versucht hast. Es klingt sehr nach direkt aus dem Deutschen übersetzt und verwendet amerikanische Rechtschreibung..... Frage ist, ob man so etwas lernt oder sich nur die Arbeit einfach macht, indem man sie dann an andere HiWis delegiert?
was born statt came to the world
at age 13 reicht
he and his wife had 4 sons.
which is why he could study in london to become a lawyer.
society und country stimmen, das in den klammern muss weg