Folgender Englisch Text ist sehr wichtig für unsere Beurteilung. Wär jemand so nett und könnte die Fehler korrigieren?
Aufgabenstellung: Du sollst stellvertretend für deine Klasse einen Report an den Direktor der englischen Schule schreiben, welche deine Klasse besuchte.
To: Mr. Brown Date: 4th January
Subject: Language week
Introduction in order to help make this report I have conducted a survey about which aspects of the trip your class liked / disliked. My findings are presented below.
Favorite aspects in the first place I want come to the point that everybody liked the most. No surprise, it was the free time. During this time our class explored London. They went to restaurants, bar and cafes where they often talked with locals. This was a great opportunity for us to improve our English skills in an interesting way.
Facilities personally I believe that the facilities are outdated. There is no computer in classroom and in the computer rooms there are not enough computers, so each two students have to share one computer. Even the furniture is in a very bad condition. In my opinion there are some overdue investigations.
Improvement suggestions as already discussed the facilities should be renewed and another big criticism was the food. The food got only one point out of ten in the survey. It is not that the food in your school is bad but it is unaccustomed to foreign students. Maybe the school should offer some less traditional English meals.
Conclusion to put the matter in a nutshell the language week was a great experience and we have developed our speaking skills a lot but to be honest I think that your school is not equipped for a foreign class.