Englisch Aufsatz auf Fehler kontrollieren.
Hallu, wir schreiben morgen eine Englisch Klassenarbeit und es wird 100%tig ein Aufsatz über Kalifornien drankommen (200 Wörter). Und da ich ihn vorher üben will hab ich schonmal eine Probe geschrieben. Und es wäre wirklich nett wenn ihr mal nach Fehlern schaut :p
Hier ist das Meisterwerk (;
I want to give you some Information about California. First, California is situated on the Continent North America and in the west of the USA. The nickname is ‘’Golden State’’ and come probably from the Gold Rush in the 19century. California is famous for his different landcapes, for example: desert, forest, beaches and more. The highest mountain is Mount Whitney and the deepest place is Death Valley. It is the 3rd hottest place of the world with 55 °C. In my opinion is this an amazing sight, I would visit it. California is the 3rd biggest state after Alasca and Texas. The neighbor states are Arizona, Nevada, Oregon and Mexico. In this wonderful state live about 40 million people, whose main languages are Spanish and English. The capital is Sacramento, but the biggest citys in the Golden State are San Francisco, Los Angeles and San Diego. A part from Los Angeles is Hollywood and the most popular
sight in California. It is famous for his movies, stars, walk of fame, the Hollywood hills and a lot of more. In the Hollywood Hills form big white letters the word Hollywood. The most famous tourist attraction in Hollywood is the Walk of Fame. This is a long sidewalk on the Hollywood Boulevard. And in this are stars with names from amazing and popular persons. You can awarded in five areas: movie, television, music, radio and theater. At the moment there are about 2400 stars. For me is California the first place where I want to fly.