Textkorrektur Englisch für Brieffreund!
Hi! Da ich mich mit meinem Englisch bei meinem Brieffreund aus Amerika (der mir klug scheint) nicht blamieren will, bitte ich euch um eine Korrektur! Danke schön!
I'm sure you would like Switzerland. It's a small country but the mountains are really great. In summer you can hike to wonderful places and in winter you can go skiing. I live in a small village. It's very peaceful and quiet here. When it's Sunday and nobody has to work, you can open up a window and you just hear the birds singing. It's a great place to relax and get away from it all. But often, it is also boring here. I mean you can't really go shopping in my village. There are no parties or something like that. If I want to meet new people or go to a disco, I have to travel to the next city...
I think Japanese or Chinese is too complicated...I'm happy when I can speak Italian and Spanish :)
I would love to visit the States, but my parents don't want to travel to America, because it's too far away. I have to wait until I'm 18. Then I can go with some friends. I'm sure I'll go at least once to the US in my life!
My hobbies? I love it to read and write, too. But my favorite hobby is playing the guitar. I play it since I'm 10 years old. I also like to travel, learn languages and meet new people.
I listen to Rock and Pop. I really like Greenday and Sunrise Avenue. What do you listen to?
I always wanted to go to New York City. It's very famous and I saw beautiful pictures of it. My best friend is in the States now. She was in Washington D.C. and in San Francisco. She will go to Los Angeles, Las Vegas and New York in a few weeks. I'm jealous of her :p
Don't care, I'm not bored. Your life sounds very interesting and I hope to read more about it :)
What's the weather like over there? Here it was pretty hot last week but at the moment, it's raining...
I wish you a nice Sunday and I'm waiting for your next mail!
wenn er nicht nur klug scheint sondern auch ist, wird er dir deinen brief nicht in rot korrigiert zurück schicken sondern vielleicht denken, da hat sich jemand mühe gegeben es so gut wie möglich zu schreiben.......da überliest man schon das eine oder andere......ich hatte vor einiger zeit einen brieffreund in japan wir haben eine mischung aus deutsch, englisch und japanisch geschrieben......mach dir da nicht so viele gedanken er wird sich freuen von dir post zu bekommen ;)
der text ist soweit okay. Ich würde Zwei Dinge anders ausdrücken. Das betrifft die beiden Textzeilen.
gerne neue Leute
einmal in meinem Leben in die Staaten gehen!
Ich habe dir mal eine Korrektur geschickt.
I am sure that you would like Switzerland. It is a little country but the mountains are really excellent. You can hike to wonderful places in summer and you can go ski driving in winter. I live in a little village. It is very peaceful and quiet here. If it is on Sunday and nobody must work, you can open a window and you just hear the birds singing. A big place is everything to fall off and get away of him. But it often is boring here, too. I think that you cannot go really to shop in my village. There are no parties or something like this. If I want to meet new people or go to a disco, I must travel to the next town...
I think that Japanese or Chinese is too complicated... I am happy if I can speak Italian and Spanish: )
I would like to go to the states but my parents do not want to travel to America because it is too far gone. I must wait until I am 18. I then can go with some friends. I am sure that I go at least in my life to the states once!
My hobbies? I enjoy that it also reads and writes. But my preferential hobby plays the guitar. I play it since I am 10 years old. I travel with pleasure, learn languages and meet new also with pleasure new people.
I listen to skirt and pop. I really like Greenday and sunrise Avenue. Do you listen what?
I wanted always to go in New York town. It is very famous and I saw beautiful pictures of this. My best friend is in the states now. She was in Washington D.C. and in San Francisco. She goes to Los Angeles, Las Vegas and New York in some weeks. I am on her: P jealous
Do not be interested that I am not bored. Your life sounds very interesting and I hope to read more about this: )
What is the weather like there? It was rather hot last week here but it is raining at the moment...
I wish you a nice Sunday and I wait for your next post!