Summary und Einordung über Film Slumdog Millionaire? Gelungen oder nicht morgen Arbeit?

Hallo wir sollen morgen in Englisch eine Analyse und vorher eine Summary über den Film Slumdog Millionaire schreiben. Hier ist meine Summary wie findet ihr sie für eine 10. Klasse Gymnasium. Wir bekommen den Ausschnitt einer Szene 32:00 - 34:15 gezeigt.

The british film 'Slumdog Millionaire' which is published in 2008 is a typical Bollywood Movie produced by the british director Dany Boyle. The movie is based on the novel 'Question and answers' and and tells the history of a Mumbai teen who grew up in the slums, becomes a contestant on the Indian version of "Who Wants To Be A Millionaire?" He is arrested under suspicion of cheating, and while being interrogated, events from his life history are shown which explain why he knows the answers.

Before the scene, Jamal and his brother Salim are living at a dump in the Slums of Mumbai. The mother of the two was killed by an angry Hindu Mob an now the two have nobody out of Latika. Latika is a young girl who follow the two brothers and now the three living together. Someday a yellow car comes to the dump. The Gangster Maman entices the three with a limonade and promise them a better life. He takes lots of Kids with him who must sing for him at the streets to earn money. Salim who can't sing is the guard of the kids. He see that Maman blend the kids eyes to earn more money. Salim get the instruction to get his brother next.

Salim and Jamal go to the place where the kids get blended. Maman begs Jamal to sing his favourite song. Jamal who think that he is going to a professional singer, wants 50 Rupies for singing. Meanwhile one of the henchman demand Salim to take the anesthetic. But Salim can't it stand to blind his brother so he throw the acid in the face of the henchman and flees with Jamal. Latika followed them unnoticed and takes flight too. The three running for their lives to a train during the gangster get closer and closer. The two brothers reach the train but Latika isn't far enough so Maman and his band can catch her.

Wie fandet ihr diese Einordnung + Summary bzw. würdet ihr es auch wenn ihr den Film nicht kennt verstehen. Bitte ich brauche ein Feedback bin etwas unsicher.

Lg Tiger

Answer 1

[AstridDerPu]

The british film 'Slumdog Millionaire' (which is) published in 2008 is a typical Bollywood Movie produced by the british director Dany Boyle. The movie is based on the novel 'Question and answers' and and tells the history of a Mumbai teen who grew up in the slums, becomes a contestant on the Indian version of "Who Wants To Be A Millionaire?" He is arrested under suspicion of cheating, and while being interrogated, events from his life history are shown which explain why he knows the answers.

Before the scene, Jamal and his brother Salim are living at a dump in the Slums of Mumbai. The mother of the two was killed by an angry Hindu Mob an now the two have nobody out of Latika. Latika is a young girl who follow the two brothers and now the three hier fehlt etwas living together. Someday a yellow car comes to the dump. The Gangster Maman entices the three with a limonade and promise them a better life. He takes lots of Kids with him who must sing for him at the streets to earn money. Salim Komma who can't sing Komma is the guard of the kids. He see that Maman blend the kids eyes to earn more money. Salim get the instruction to get his brother next.

Salim and Jamal go to the place where the kids get blended. Maman begs Jamal to sing his favourite song. Jamal who think that he is going to hier fehlt etwas a professional singer, wants 50 Rupies for singing. Meanwhile Komma one of the henchman demand Salim to take the anesthetic. But Salim can't it stand to blind his brother so he throw the acid in the face of the henchman and flees with Jamal. Latika followed them unnoticed and takes flight too. The three hier fehlt etwas running for their lives to a train during the gangster get closer and closer. The two brothers reach the train Komma but Latika isn't far enough so Maman and his band can catch her.

• he, she, it das s muss mit
• in der Schriftform sollten keine Kurzformen (can't usw.) verwendet werden
• da fehlen noch ein paar Kommas

Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.

Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.eu,

für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de.

:-) AstridDerPu