Summary für englisch gut so?
Hi leute ich sollte eine Summary für englisch könnt ihr mir sagen ob das okay ist?
The excerpt " I hate my dad" from the text "Love Lessons", written by Jacqueline Wilson, is about a girl who tells us what kind of problems she has with her father, who's very strict.
At first she tells us that her dad is much stricter then other dads and that he keeps her a virtual prisoner. He also took her, Prudence and her sister Grace out of school because he wanted to educate them. Prudence isn’t allowed to go anywhere alone. The father doens’t even like it when she goes to maths tution by herself. This summer a Mr Miles visited them to talk about the childrens future. When he asked what they wanted to be Grace said she wanted to be a vet. Mr Miles said that you need to pass a lot of exams to become a vet. The Father just answered that Grace has no more brains than a donkey. Prudence could do the catalouging. But she wants to study Art. He didn’t like that idea, it’s just a waste of time and money. Mr Miles and the Father arrgued about that. Then Mr Miles said that the father needs to do a better job otherwise the matter might have to pursue through the courts. The father tought he was bluffing but he still fixed Prudence up to go to maths tutition. She always got 20 pound to pay Miss Roberts. But the last 3 times she didn’t go, she kept the money and brought some teenager Magazines. After she read throught the problems of the teenagers in the Magazines she just thought those teenagers should have my parents.
An sich ist der Text sehr gut (übrigens: der hat mir sehr bei den Hausaufgaben geholfen!) , aber da sind noch eine Menge Fehler drin.
Da sind eine Menge Fehler drin, sowohl grammatikalisch als auch von der Rechtschreibung her. Und man versteht nicht alles. Wer zum Beispiel ist Prudence?