in englisch sollen wir eine Geschichte weiterschreiben und ich habe das dann auch gemacht. ich bin mir aber total unsicher, ob der text so einigermaßen richtig ist könnte eventuell jemand sich den text ansehen und sagen ob die grammatik richtig ist und so? bzw. ihn korrigieren? ich weiß, dass das in gewisser weise viel verlangt ist ich wäre euch aber wirklich sehr dankbar :) danke im voraus
But not the same four people...
The Nose of they was smaller, the ears of they was bigger, and they had a tail.
It looks like, they're Neko's.
Six days before...
„Dani, wake up!“ Donovan's girlfriend open her eyes and looks arround. „What is happening?“ „I don't know, but this isn't our tent...“ Donovan and my girlfriend are missing and we are in a dark room, with only one door. I try to open this door, but the key is missing. „What now?“, ask Dani. My shoulders go up and down and I sit on the floor. 3 days later the door was open and a woman, it looks like she was 20 years old, come in. „Good morning, I'm sorry you must waite, but experiment neko was open and our testobjects died.“
„What is a Neko?“
„A Neko is a human with cateyes, catears and cattail.“
„You mean, the things in mangas and animes?“
„Yes. But since a few weeks are Nekos real.“
„Who was this testobjects?“
„That was five people. Micha Manuel, Patrick, Dado and Frederik“
(Notice behind the Story: if you know this people: I'm jusz a normal fan and NO fangirl. I just use the names of the Freedom Squad and the old Freedom-gamer)
„And... why are we here? Where are Donovan and Ruby?“ The women laughs like a psycho and comes nearby me: „Your little friends are Inus and you two will be Nekos.“
Inu? Inu is the japanese word of dog. „Inus? Are they dogs?“
„No, they are Nekos, just with dog signs.“
Just with This woman is a psychopath!
„Uhm... where is Dani?“ In the same moment I hear a shout from my friend. „If she's strong enough, you see Dani tomorrow again. If not... you know what is than.“
One day later comes Dani back to me and I make the same procedur like her. It was terrible, my head hurts … Donovan and my girlfriend looks like a half dog! They show us how to live as a cat or a dog. How to sleep like they, how to eat like they, how to wash like they.
Back in the future
And now? Our tents and our stuff is at our first-night-sleeping-place. We go on 4 hands and we can't speak. Just the cat (or dog) language come over our lips.
We aren't the same four people …