ich halte ein Englisch Referat und ich wollte wissen ob da Grammatik Fehler drin sind, weil ich mir nicht sicher bin. Es wäre nett wenn sich das jemand durchliest und mir dann die Fehler nennt. Falls ihr euch wundert wieso es so komisch ist geordnet ist, wir sind in Gruppen aufgeteilt und jeder von uns halt bestimmte Aufgaben. :D
Danke im Voraus. :)
The table on this poster ( If you can’t see it, then you’ll have to get closer) is about the average temperatures in Kangaroo Island. You can see, January and February are the warmest months in the year. The averages of the maximum temperature in these months are about 28°. The coldest months are June and July. At this time of the year the temperatures are often between 7° and 15°. Besides there are many rain days in these months, instead of days where it snows, because in Kangaroo Island and generally in South Australia there’s almost no snow. If you want to visit Kangaroo Island, I’ll advise
you to visit it in March, April or May.
The Axel Stenross Maritime Museum has been made over 25 years ago for Axel Stenross, the famous ship builder. The museum is a historic house, but it’s not that expensive decorated. Axel Stenross wasn’t that rich, as you can see by some of the walls which are made from tea chests . It has a great collection of historic boats, artefact and photographs. This museum is worth visiting!
Now I’ll tell you something about Little Sahara. It’s a really beautiful area with white sand surrounded by the Bush. There are many ridges consists of sand dunes to climb. The ridges are all pointed (=spitz), which makes it very special. Right after you have climbed the first ridge, there’s another ridge, much higher than the other one, waiting to be climbed. At the top of the third huge sand ridge you have a great view of the coastline. One of the most fun things to do at the Little Sahara is sandboarding and even if you crash while surfing down the sand at top speed, it
doesn’t hurt at all.
Now I continue with Rundle Mall, Adelaide’s main shopping place. It’s the oldest pedestrian mall in Australia. There you find the three largest department stores, 15 shopping centers and many other shops where you can buy gifts, jewellerys, home wares, fashion clothes and much more. In Rundle Mall you have a great selection of restaurants, cafes and food halls where you can eat. The mall is also known for it’s events, street performers and fashion parades.
Haigh’s Chocolate Factory is Australia’s oldest manufacturer where chocolate is handmade. They roast and import their own beans, which makes this Factory very special. The chocolate they prepare tastes excellent. If you want to visit this Factory, you can also take a tour to find out more about the history of the company and about the produce of delicious chocolate.
Der letzte Teil passt da nicht rein. :S