Schulfach Englisch: Pro und Contra zum allgemeinen Klonen (Tips zu Inhalt, Rechtschreibung und Stil)

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Vom Fragesteller als hilfreich ausgezeichnet

pros: 1. Leukemia (= AE; BE = leukaemia) patients need a Clone's blood to get well. -> So (stilistisch kein optimaler Satzanfang) cloning is important for a (besser: bestimmter Artikel) healing process. 2. It's able (Wort) to rear (Wort) and implant organs for (züchten und implantieren haben unterschiedliche Präpositionen.) ill people. -> It's useful to save life (besser Plural lives). 3. Cloning is a big (Hier würde ich evtl. ein anderes Adjektiv wählen.) medical process 4. GM food (cloned food) is useful in poor (Wort) times, when we haven't (Grammatik) enough food.

cons: 1. Cloning harms (Hier würde ich ein anders Verb wählen.) the human dignity 2. Cloned persons (unregelm. Plural)

are not individual (Ausdruck) 3. There could be illegal dealings (Wort), like illegal organ dealings (s.o.) 4. The clone's expectancy of life is not high.

Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.

Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.eu (Einträge bitte bis zum Ende lesen und evtl. ein einsprachiges Dictionary, z.B. das http://oxforddictionaries.com, das Longman Dictionary of Contemporary English online oder auch das Oxford Advanced Learner's Dictionary, verwenden.)

für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de.

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Ist diese/r Comment/Argumentation ok? (Englisch Hilfe!)

Hallo ! Ich schreiben nächste Woche eine Englisch Arbeit zum Thema Genetically Modified Food. Ich wollte mich drauf vorbereiten und habe deshalb schon einen kurzen Comment geschrieben. Könnt ihr mir helfen und nachschauen ob das so ok ist. Danke im Voraus!

In the following text I am going to write about the topic: “GM food” GM food is produced from plants or animals whose genes have been changed by scientists. A loophole in the law allowed supermarkets to sell genetically modified food. Should it be banned? And should mankind manipulate the gene?

In my opinion the GM food should be banned. The problem is that many people didn't know that the most food in supermarkets are genetically modified. I believe if they knew what they eat, then many people wouldn´t buy the GM food. The food is unpopular among consumers.

On the one hand, the GM food is much cheaper than nature food. On the other hand the food is unhealthy. The GM animals die much earlier than normal animals and they suffer too. There is no doubt about it that the GM food is unhealthy.

In addition, the mankind didn’t know which consequences at manipulate of gene there can be. Maybe it can trigger allergies or a disease. If this happens, we might not have effective antibiotic drugs to fight back.

Hence I believe that the GM Food is not only harmful for us but also for the animals. That is why I think that GM food should be banned. Mankind shouldn’t change anything what worked of thousands years.

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Sätze mit used to....?

hey könnt ihr mir ein paar sätze mit "used to" und "didn't use to" sagen ??

z.b.

" I used to listen to music on my CD player, but now I only listen to my mp3 player."

"I didn't use to like healty food, but now I think it's OK."

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Wo kommt "only" in diesem Satz hin? (Englisch, Satzbau)

Also: A person who makes an effort to eat only food that is..... Oder A person who makes an effort only to eat food that is .....

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Was bedeutet das:the itunes store is unable to process purchases at this time?

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Englische Abschlussprüfung, Verbesserungsvorschläge?

Morgen habe ich meine mündliche Englisch Abschlussprüfung (Realschule, Bayern) und wollte hier mal nach Meinungen und Verbesserungsvorschläge für ein paar der expressions fragen.

"Nice to meet you. First of all, i'd like to introduce myself. My name is xy and what's your name?"

"When is your date of birth?"

"After my graduation im going to attend the further educational college in xy. What are your plans after school?" (suche hier noch ein anderes Wort für attend)

"It's been a pleasure talking to you"

"I look forward to speaking to you again in the future"

Höre gerne weitere expressions oder sonstige Tipps.

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englisch referat ( fast food)

Hallo kann mir jemand weiter helfen ? ich muss ein für meine englisch Prüfung (am montag) einen englischen vortrag halten 5 min. 1. über sich selbst erzählen. 2. über ein spezielles Thema ( fast Food.) - ich weiss nicht mehr weiter und das was ich jetzt geschrieben habe geht nur so 3 min ...

bis jetzt habe ich das :

My Name is ................. and I am 15 years old. I was born on May. 21st.1997 in Heidelberg- Germany .My mother is 51 years old . When I was four years old my father died of a heart attack. In the meantim I have a stepfather I also have four sisters, one younger and two older. Melanie is 14 years old, daniela is 25 years old and Sabine she's 27 years old.My grandparents are already dead. I live with my family in Wiesental.. My favourite colour is green and my favourite food is Chicken wings. My favorite animals are penguins . I enjoy going to the cinema because I love movies. I prefer to listen to music but I spend a lot time with my friends . My best friend is Debora. Every sunday I go to the swimming pool. I like reading books very much especially about love , my favourite book is „weil du bei mir bist“. My special topic is Fast food and overweight children in the Usa. Today, about one in three American kids and teens is overweight or obese. The USA has the most overweight teenagers in the world : 14 % of 15 year old boys and 15 % of 15 year old girls.The problem is Fast Food, because most of the food has lots of calories and the people eat too much. Burger, Sandwiches, Hot Dogs and Fried Chicken are typical Fast Food. The most famous restaurants are Mc Donalds, Burger King and Subway. They are located in over 100 countries. Most of the fast food restaurants got a drive-through.Fast Food restaurants are perfect for people who havent got much time and money to eat. Mc Donalds is located in 120 countries and operates over 31.000 restaurants worldwide. The first Mc Donalds was opened on the 15 may 1940 in California. Burger King has more than 11.000 restaurants in more than 65 countries. Subway has 31.000 Restaurants in 90 countries. Today the United States has the largest fast food industry in the world. On the one hand , I think fast food resturants are Ok. You get your food quckly and the food is cheaper than in other resturants. The Resturants are good place for teenagers to meet because you don't have to behave quietly or wear anything special. The Resturants are always open too. On the other hand, most of the food is unhealthy. Some food is OK, but most of it has lots of calories. All the paper isn't good for the environment and the Resturants aren't very nice.

Ich hoffe mir kann jemand helfen ? :(((( danke im vorraus !

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