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Dear Anne,

Lot's of greets from New York. My family and I will stay here for five days. It's a so big city and it's one of the best places I have ever seen in my life. Yesterday we visit the Empire State Building. With 381 meters it is the biggest skyscraper in NY and when you are on the top of the sight, you have a wounderful view over the whole city.

Oh yeah and today we visit the Central Park. I took lots of pictures for you and when I come home, I have to show you them ;) After that we went to China Town. Its so funny - the places there looks like little China. At least we drove with the subway to our hotel. Tomorrow we will go to the statue of liberty. For the last day, Dad have a big surprise for us - but I don't have any idea.

I hope I'll see you soon. Love, Marie

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Kommentar von nannilima
04.10.2011, 21:48

Hey Danke, dass du dir die mühe gemacht hast. Der Brief ist wirklich besser als meiner. =) hilfreichste antwort ;)

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Dear Anne,

We are staying in New York for a week. It's very big and --- one of the best places I have ever seen in my life. There are very tall buildings like skyscrapers and the Empire State Building! Anne**, you won't** believe me, but I know what Im writing about. We have been on the **Empire State Building. The view is too brilliant for words / is beyond description! You have a view across the whole city! It's incredibly great (= großartig) large/big. On Wednesday we were in Central Park. It's so beautiful there. I must show you the photos I have taken there, when I’m back home again. But now I’m still in New York for another 4 days. By the way, I was in **China Town yesterday. It's so crazy there. The people are very funny. At least (= wenigstens) ???; Vlt. Afterwards, ** we **went to our hotel by subway. That wasn’t so funny. There were lots of people and tourists who pushed me. I was glad / relieved when we were back at the hotel... Tomorrow we will **go and see the Statue of Liberty and on the last day, we will do some window shopping on Fifth Avenue, as it is much too expensive to buy anything in the stores located there.

I miss you, Marie

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Hab leider nicht viel Zeit um deine Fehler zu berichtigen, jedoch würde ich dir raten die Zeiten nochmal anzugucken, denn du springst manchmal hin und her. Zusätzlich hast du ein paar kleine Rechtschreibfehler. Aber ansonsten ist dir der Brief echt gelungen :))

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Dear Anne,

Lot's of greets from New York. My family and I will stay here for five days. It's** a so** big city and it's one of the best places I have ever seen in my life. Yesterday we visit the Empire State Building. With 381 meters it is the biggest skyscraper in NY and when you are on the top of the sight, you have a wounderful view over the whole city.

Oh yeah and today we visit the Central Park. I took lots of pictures for you and when I come home, I have to show you them ;) After that we went to China Town. Its so funny - the places there looks like little China. At least we drove with the subway to our hotel. Tomorrow we will go to the statue of liberty. For the last day, Dad have a big surprise for us - but I don't have any idea. außerdem falsche Word Order

I hope I'll see you soon. Love, Marie

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Kommentar von nannilima
05.10.2011, 13:45

danke (:

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