Past Tense richtig angewendet?
First we spent two weeks at the Great Barrier Reef. We went swimming and tried windsurfing. Then we spent a week at sea and fished. We caught a very big fish! After a week at sea, we went to Sydney for five days and did some shopping there. Later we drove for two days with the Flying Doctor to the tribes of the old native inhabitants of Australia, the Aborigines. I think it's great that they are getting medical care too. Then we went for a ride with camels for two weeks. I enjoyed this a lot, even though it was very shaky. Unfortunately the six weeks vacation has already end and on the last day we had to fly back at home by plane. It was very nice!
- I think its great that they got medical care too.
- Unfortunately the six weeks vacation already ended [...]
Das sind 2 Fehler die mir aufgefallen sind und meines Erachtens nach falsch sind. Falls ich falsch liege klärt mich gerne auf :) LG
Past tense ist überall korrekt, das Past Perfect im letzten Satz beinahe: has come to an end (oder has ended).
Übrigens: at home = zu Hause; nach Hause = home . Übrigens fliegen wir alle immer by plane, eine spezielle Erwähnung zum fly scheint also eher überflüssig.
By den Aborigines stell das too nach vor zum they. Das Präsens ist ok.