Hilfe bei Facharbeit in Englisch.. kann mal jemand meinen Text übergucken? ;)
Also kurze Erklärung: Ich muss morgen meine Facharbeit in Englisch abgeben und hatte zwar die Gelegenheit einige Abschnitte kontrollieren zu lassen, jedoch nicht alle. Deswegen würde ich die bitten, die Englisch können, mir zu helfen. Danke im Vorraus ;)
Hier die erste Teilabschnitt (zweiter folgt in einer nächsten Frage von mir):
At first I want to say that African-Americans earns on the scale of things less than Whites. This has nothing to do with the time they are working because on an average in 2005 Afro-Americans earned only 65 percent of the wages of the Whites down from 82 percent in 1975. Also in the topic “work” there are a few differences between men and women. In 1999 was noticed that black men who worked year-round full-time earned more than comparable black women. This is not only a problem of black people because white women also earn less than white men. In spite of these high differences between the revenue of African-Americans and Whites have people with Afro- American origin the third highest earnings of minority groups. Many people say that this problem of money is only a problem of the high unemployment rate which has doubled since Barack Obama governs America but this is wrong. Fewer African-Americans have a workplace than white men but this rate diverged not very much and in contrast to that averagely more black women work than white ones. The most Afro- Americans work in sales and offices occupations. For this I will enumerate a few facts in terms of percentages of black workers in different work areas. The lowest percentage of workers in a special area is the production, transportation and material working job rate. The second lowest rate were Blacks who work in service jobs. The second highest number of percent appears in the occupational field of management, professional and related occupations. Hereto there is also the interesting information that a higher proportion of black women (30%) than black men (20%) are active in this area. Black men are druther active in production, transportation or material jobs. The highest number of black workers you can find in sales and office occupations. This rates are rates of the year 2000. The rates changes every year mostly in political realm. Only 50 years agothere were less than 500 black incumbent in America. Today there are more than 9000. The African- Americans achieve amazing things since the 1960s. For example there are 43 (8%) delegates in the congress although the part of population is at only 12,5 percent. Today many big cities are governed by Afro-American mayors. An additional reason is that numerous ministry post are taken by Afro-American people. Moreover there are two governors since 2008. One in Massachusetts and one in New York. The biggest conspicuousness is ascertainable in the southern states. Since the Voting Right Act was adopted the number of incumbents increased from 72 in year 1965 to over 5000 today.