Mündliche Prüfung Englisch richtig geschrieben?
Hallo Als erstes ich hab am Montag eine Mündliche Prüfung in Englisch über Dream Job ich wollte fragen ob ich es richtig hab wenn es falsch ist könntet Ihr es vlt verbessern Dankeeeeee 😌😭
My dream job In the following I will tell you something about my dream job. My dream is to be a police officer because the uniform gives me strength. When I was a child I always wanted to arrest criminals to secure the city. In addition, I had three weeks internship at the police station and it was very interesting. So I can imagine to work as a cop. I like that there are many departments in this job. On point is the police protection, the second one is the criminal police and finally the district police. The police protection has many interesting activities. They are called to inserts, furthermore to traffic accidents but anyway it is very dangerous because at times they must arrest very criminal persons. The criminal police is also an interesting department. They consult witnesses and victims of crime, write reports and they are civil. That’s very important, so they are not recognized by the criminals. The district police is something for older cops because there they don’t have to do much action. The main points of their duties are attending schools and speaking with the pupils. But that unfortunately doesn't sounds interesting to me. I rather want to work at the police protection because it is very diversified. In this job you can earn about 2000 € a month. But that also can increase. So that was my presentation about my dream job, thank you very much for listening.
Ich denke es sollte heißen "had a three weeks internship". Also man hatte ein Drei-Wochen-Praktikum. Auch auf Deutsch ist "man hat drei Wochen Praktikum" umgangssprachlich.
Ansonsten sollte es passen. habs grob überflogen. Irgendwo könnte statt Plural ein Singular gewesen sein.
Wenns schriftlich ist, dann bitte ausschreiben. "does not" statt "doesn't", "that is" anstatt "that's", usw.
Ach ja....statt "inserts" würde ich "police operations" schreiben. Ersteres gibts glaub ich gar nicht als Übersetzung für Polizeieinsatz.
Irgendwo ist noch ein Flüchtigkeitsfehler. Statt "one" hast du "on" geschrieben.
Ach ja...das "unfortunately" würde ich voransetzen.
schreibfehler sieht man ja nicht im mündlichen.
ein job hat ausserdem keine departments...
was soll denn "they are civil" heissen.
wie alt bist du?
also ICH hätte es anders geschrieben, bin aber auch älter und beherrsche die sprache besser und daher wird besseres auch von mir erwartet...
I want to work at the police protection?? was soll das heissen?
cop ist umgangssprache
vielleicht solltest du zwischen verkehrs- und kriminalpolizei unterscheiden.. haste ja sicher in deinem praktikum gelernt, hm?
Hallo könnte wer mein englisch Referat kontrollieren?
What is factory farming ?. Factory Farming is a way of producing meat and other animal products quickly and cheaply. The animals are kept in small cages. They get special food, so they are growing faster. The main products of this industry are meat, milk and eggs for human consumption. Advantages: Cheaper prices With the use of factory farms, the prices of food became very cheap. The main reason for this is that the food can be processed very fast. Also, the food for the animals is very cheap, because they buy it in mass orders. Enough animal products for the market Factory farms use vitamins, minerals, and other substances that make animals grow faster and so they can produce much more food. Big farms also have modern tools which helps to produce meat, milk, eggs and other products very quickly and in an efficient way.
Disadvantages: Very bad living conditions In many factory farms the animals are kept in small cages, where they don’t have any space to walk around and do what they naturally do. The animals are usually kept indoor, so they don’t get any fresh air or sun. The cages are not cleaned as often as it is necessary, so the living conditions for the animals are very bad.
Bad for people’s health Factory farms are bad for people’s health in two ways. One of these is the pollution what they produce, which harm the health of the people who are living next to them. The other way is through the antibiotics that they give their animals to make them immune against illnesses. These can be transmitted to people from the meat and other animal products.
Small farming businesses haven’t a chance against factory farms Many factory farms are owned by corporations, who have the possibility to buy modern tools, equipment and larger spaces for the animals. They’re able to sell their products at a lower price. Smaller farms usually don’t have the resources to buy faster and bigger machines and therefore they can’t compete with their larger rivals.
Morgen mündliche Englisch Realschulprüfung, Text Korrektur
Hallo, ich habe morgen meine mündliche Realschulprüfung. Wir haben heute die Aufgabe für die Kurzpresentation(2-3min.) bekommen und wollte eure Meinung wissen. Es geht um ,,My Dream Job,, Hier ist der Text: My dream job Now I will tell you something about my dream job. My dream is to be a police officer because the uniform gives me strength. When I was a child I always wanted to arrest criminals to secure the city. I had three weeks internship at the police station and it was very interesting. So I can imagine to work as a cop. There are many departments in this job. Once the police protection, second the criminal police and finally the district police. The police protection has many interesting activities. They are called to inserts, to traffic accidents but anyway it is very dangerous because they arrest criminals. The criminal police is also an interesting department. They consult witnesses, they consult victims of crime, write reports and they are civil. That’s very important so they are not recognized by the criminals. The district police is something for older cops because they don’t have much action. They attend schools and speak with the pupils. That is not a thing for me. I want to work more at the police protection because it is very interesting. In this job you can earn about 2000 € a month. But it also can increase. That was my presentation about my dream job.
Englisch, Grammatik, Gerunds, Sätze bilden, Rat/Hilfe
Ich habe die folgende Aufgabe gelöst, weiß aber nicht ob meine Ergebnisse richtig sind, könnt ihr mir sagen ob meine Ergebnisse richtig sind?
Gerunds. David Brown asked some 15-year-old students waht their ideas and feelings about the future were. Here are his notes. Write out his report.
- some - afraid of - leave school - because - scared of - not get - a job
Mein Ergebnis: Some are afraid of leaving school because they scared of not getting a job.
- others - lokk - forward to - leave school - because - interested in - get - a job
Mein Ergebnis: The others look forward to leaving school because they are interested in getting a job.
- Quite a lot of young people - quickly - give up - look for - 'dream job'
Mein Ergebnis: Quite a lot of young people give up quickly looking for 'dream job'.
- Quite a few young people - believe in - work - hard - at school
Mein Ergebnis: Quite a few young people believe in working hard at school.
- They - think - get - top marks - means - get - the best job
Mein Ergebnis: They think getting top marks means getting the best job.
- Some studenst - start - learn - another foreign language - because - they - sure - speak - more than one foreign language - is - necessary in - top job
Mein Ergebnis: Some students start learning another foreign language because they are sure speaking more tan one foreign language is necessary in top job.
Sind meine Ergebnisse korrekt, wenn nicht wie lauten die korrekten Ergebnisse? Gibt es Tipps zum Gerundium?