Laura, by Robert O'Neill, Einleitung Tipps?

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The author Robert O’Neill gives us a short story named “Laura”, in our
hands without an (Grammatik; RS) detailed beginning and an (Grammatik; RS) conclusive ending. We just can follow (Word Order) the situation – Laura is sitting in a restaurant with a man, but it seems that he have (Grammatik done something wrong so that whe (RS) throws a glas (RS)
of wine into his face and runs out of the restaurant. The man want (Grammatik) to explain, but as (Wort) she just turns around and stare (Grammatik) at him, a driver turns into the street where Laura is standing. At (Präposition) the End (RS; Komma) we are’nt (RS) know (Grammatik) (kein Komma) what happs (Wort) to her (kein Komma) because it (Wer oder Was?) just ends with the fact that the driver is destract (Grammatik) and Laura turns now (Word Order; Grammatik) the (Possessive Pronomen) head to the driver (kein Komma) during (Wort) the car is close to (---) her.

Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.

Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B.,

für die Grammatik und - und Finger weg vom Google Übelsetzer und seinen tr.tteligen Kollegen!

:-) AstridDerPu

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vikaaaxx 20.09.2016, 17:33

So what we can take from the story, especially when it goes around Laura, we can read out, that she seems to be young, around eighteen and above. The fact that she throws a glass of wine in the face of the man, is enough to assume, that she is of age. And this part shows us, that she is impulsive, mean, respectless, but fair enough angry, even if we don’t know what was happening. A Mixture of agressive, confidend and dissapointed. We also don’t know, how she looks like, what for a
type of human she is and which thougts in her actions she might have. Anyway, as she runs out and does nothing more, than just turning her head back to the man, while standing in the middle of the street, it is hard to say, how she could actually felt, wheter she is just too desperate to realise, that she is standing on the street or wheter. The situation where Laura turns her head to
the driver, in front her, in the car, begs for the same question; Was she just so stressed, disaponted and desperated and is the point of the qole story?

Wääre es möglich, das auch noch zu korrigieren und zu verbessern? .-.


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