Konnt ihr mir den Text auf englisch korrigieren?

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Now I'll tell you something about Rita Oras childhood. When Rita was one and her sister three years old, their parents flew from the war in Kosovo to London. When they arrived in Great Britain, Rita and her sister were sent to the Children's Home without their parents. Soon after, her Mother had Breast Cancer for the second time. Worrying about her Mother, Rita insurged even more. When she was not successful with her music, she seemed to slip off even more. She had the feeling that she was the worst child. She was really bad at school and she did not know what her Mother had to deal with back then. Rita had nothing to do with drugs but she was surrounded by them.

So hätte ich es übersetzt. :)

Englische Geschichte (Rechtschreibfehler prüfen)

Hallo ich muss eine Geschichte auf Englisch schreiben auf morgen und sie wird benotet und wollte fragen ob ich Rechtschreib- oder Grammatikfehler habe :

On the next day Kayla woke up and felt weak. She wondered where she was and where Luzy was. After she was sent at home by the hospital. She tried to reach Kayla with phone. But she couldn´t reach her, so she started to desperate. She felt guilty because it was her fault that Luzy was in a critical condition, meanwhile the boys made a testimony to the police. After that they explained their parents what happened. Kayla went a couple of hours later to the hospital to visit Luzy and she was fortunately there. While she was entering the room a nurse brang Luzy food. Before she entered a doctor said Kayla that Luzy was ok and could go at home tomorrow, Kayla was immediately glad. The girls talked a few hours, then Kayla went home and slept.

So, das ist eine Nach-Geschichte von mir von dem Text Joy riding wir habe aufbekommen zu überlegen wie es weitergehen könnte fällt euch ein anderes Wort zu polizeiliche Aussage ein (anstatt testimony) ? Danke im vorraus.

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Könnte jemand Korrekturlesen Englischer Text?

Hallo zusammen könnte jemand über meinen Text schauen und mir ein feedback geben bzw. gucken ob alles grammatikalisch richtig ist.

Vielen Dank im Voraus.

Der Text:

It was on Monaday  the 10 of may 2008,  as the phone ring, and the doctor told my father that my mother will get my baby sister.I was 13 years old. I just remember that my sibilings and i were real excited to have a baby sister in our life that really changed everything. My littel sister was born at a very heavy time, my parents had private problems, we moved from Bremen to Aachen, on the one hand it was a very stressful time but on the other hand  the birth of my sister was a wonderful present for my parents , because they were full of happieness to had a new baby after 10 years and they forgot all their problems in this heavy time.

The day when my father saying that my baby sister was born i was so excited i screamed of exitement until i lost my breathe, when we went to the delivery room it was an incredible miracle.

My sibilings and i stood around her and looked at her, suddenly she smile to us, 

no joke she was a few hous old and smiled to us, this was a very emotinal moment for us  we couldent belive that this little worm is our sister.

The first time when i hold her was very heavy i felt like i was going to drop her but i didnt.

My baby sister was a very specially baby she was very small and she had very dark, almost black hair, a light skinned and round eys.

The hole hospital love her becouse she was so sweet.

If we went outside with her she got everywhere attention because she always similed and laughing.

I still remember exactly what her first word was, it was „ zerbes“ this means on  Kurdish watermelon, this was her favorite food until today.

Today my baby sister ist not anymore a baby , she is 10 years old and she is in the fourth grade of a primary school, she is sometimes naughty but still very loving,  i am so proud to be her big sister.

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Englisch Präsentation über Amy Winehouse!

Hallo Leute ! Ich werde demnächst in Englisch eine Präsentation über Amy Winehouse halten . Ich benutze dafür PowerPoint. Könnt ihr vielleicht mal kurz durchlesen ,ob das in Ordnung ist oder ,ob da irgendwelche Grammatikfehler sind?

structure

  1. little facts
  2. family 3.career
  3. health 5.cause of death

facts

  • first name : Amy Jade
  • last name : Winehouse
  • zodiac sign : Virgo
  • birth date : 14/09/1983
  • death date : 23/07/2011

    family

  • grew up in London with her mother,father and brother
  • part of her family are russians
  • many of her uncles were professional jazz musicians
  • her grandmother Cynthia, was a singer
  • her parents separated when she was nine
  • lived with her mom
  • stayed with her father and his girlfriend on weekends
  • 2007 to 2009, she was married to Blake Fielder-Civil

    career

  • she received singing lessons from her grandmother
  • With twelve, she changed to a british school for young artist's
  • With fiveteen,she had to change the school for the 5th time because of disruptive behavior
  • With sixteen,she left the school and played in a jazz orchestra
  • With eighteen,she completed her first contract with Iceland records
  • 2003,her first album ''Frank'' came out

health

  • she was a drug addict,because of her husband
  • Alcohol problems
  • mental problems
  • self injury
  • suffered from bulimia and anorexia
  • End of 2008, she separated from Blake
  • got clean

cause of death

  • she was found dead in her apartment in London when she was twenty-seven
  • Reason : alcohol poisoning with 4.16 per thousand in blood
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Englisch Referat Korrektur (Jennifer Lopez)

Ist dieser Text für mein Referat ok? (Korrektur, Grammatikalisch) Und wenn, was würdet Ihr hier bei diesem Text verändern? Ich bitte um Hilfe <3

Jennifer was born on July 24, 1969, in the Castle Hill section of the Bronx. Her father, David Lopez, was a computer technician. Her mother, Guadalupe Lopez, taught kindergarten. Jennifer is the middle of three daughters. Her elder sister, Leslie Lopez, is a housewife who sings opera. Her younger sister, Linda López (aka Lynda Lopez), is a DJ on New York's WKTU, a VH1 VJ, and a morning news show correspondent on New York's Channel 11. Jennifer's parents were born in Puerto Rico, but did not meet until both came to America. Her mother's parents were Europeans who settled in Puerto Rico. She says that it was her parents' work ethic that made a difference in her life. Jennifer took singing and dancing lessons from age 5. She attended 12 years of Catholic school, including an all-girl high school. She played softball and tennis in high school and was a gymnast.

After high school, she briefly worked in a law office. During this time, she continued dance classes at night. At 18, she left home because her mother was scared by her decision to pursue show business. With her casting on In Living Color (1990) in 1990, she moved to L.A., but initially hated it. Finally, her boy friend, David Cruz, moved to be with her there and she learned to accept her new environment. Her career took off from her "In Living Color" stint and reached new peaks with her portrayal of slain Latino singer, Selena, in Selena - Ein amerikanischer Traum (1997).

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Kann mir vielleicht jemand die summary korrigieren?

The article “Bag lady” from the magazine mail of Sunday by Rebecca Hosking is about the environment and marine pollution Rebecca Hosking went to Hawaii for a documentary for the BBC . She is a lady which is committed to the environment. Also she wanted to watch the beauty of Hawaii. But when she was there she was shocked about the situation. Because they was a lot of dead albatross chicks and a lot of trash which came from the ocean to hawaii

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Könntet Ihr vielleicht eure eigene Meinung zu diesem Text geben?

                                             Same old love 

There she was sitting in the dark in her bedroom,small tears rolled down her cheeks. She blinked many times to stop them from spilling but it wasn’t working. When she closed her eyes, she saw his face and his eyes. Damn his eyes… İn the afternoon she was sitting on her couch and watching Netflix like every Sarurday. The ringing from her phone bringing her back to reality. On the display was written DEAN .She picked up. ‘‘Hey, love.“, Deans voice rang through the speakers. ‘‘Hey, babe. What’s up?“ ‘‘I wondered if we could maybe go out tonight?“ She thought for a second. ‘‘Yea, would you mind to pick me up?“ ‘‘Be ready at 8.“ And then he hung up. She immidently agreed, because arguing with him would be sensless.He’s such a dickhead. When she looked at her watch, she realized, that she only had one hour to get ready, so she got up and went to her bedroom. As she undressed herself, she looked at the mirror. The silver ring around her neck catching her attantion. HARRY was written in it. Her mind driftin off. I miss him so much, she thought, how is there no conection anymore between us? You got a boyfriend, you idiot. Stop thinking about him. She shook her head. Finally she got dressed and was ready. The door bell rung and she dopple checked her things. When she opened the door, she saw Dean leaning on the door frame, smirking down at her.‘‘Shall we?“, he asked, took her hand and lead her to the passenger seat. After a ten minute ride, they were standing infront of a club with the font OLD LOVE, wich was blinking in a bright pink. When they were in the club, Dean shouted over the loud music ‘‘Do you want a drink?“ Belle nodded. So now she was alone, sitting in a corner. The smell of sweat and alcohol running through her nose. Then something cought her eye. A pair of piercing green eyes. No, brain stop! You can’t just imagine him here. She thought. They looked directly into her hazel eyes. Suddenly he walked to the back exit from the club and then he was gone. She immidently stood up and ran after him, but a hard chest stopping her. ‘‘Where are you going sweetheart?“ Deans blue eyes looking down at her. She could smell the alcohol in his breath. ‘‘I don’t feel very well, so I am going to get some fresh air.“ He moved aside and she walked to the door. The cool air blowing against her lightly flushed cheeks. She wrapped her arms thighter around her jacket. Why isn't it warm for once in London? She looked around her eyes scanning the dark alley. A tall frame standing in the corner.''You fallowed me.'', a deep raspy voice said. A cloud of smoke coming from his lips. '' I did.'' '' Belle.'' '' Harry.'' ''Why are you here? I thought you were in L.A.'' '' It didn't workout very well.'' , the words coming a bit harsh. '' What are you up to?'', his once cheery voice, cold and dark. '' I..I am curently working in a office.'' '' Good for you. But you didn't change at all. The long brown hair or

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