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(---) 13 year-old Alejandro Zamora calls himself „a Facebook freak“. A life without the social network seems to be unthinkable for the eighth grader. (---) most of his spare time he chats with his friends or just hangs around the social media platform. His mother said that she liked the idea of him using the computer but did not have much luck getting him to use it for homework. She herself has no clue about social networks and his online activities. This phenomenon is not an exception in an American household. As access to devices has spread in order to enable all Americans to get the latest computing tools, children and teenagers began to spend between 10 and 11.5 hours per day on watching shows and videos, playing games and connecting on social networking sites. Unfortunately Komma the majority of the American population do not know how to use their technical devices in a constructive way for example for education.That is because there is a lack of digital literacy in America, but what is digital literacy? Digital literacy is the ability to handle media responsibly and to use it and its contents according to one’s own needs and purposes and to effectively and critically navigate, evaluate and create information using a range of digital technologies. Researchers and policy makers has recognized that it is not sufficient to just enable everyone the access to computing tools because they are misused mostly for pure entertainment instead of education. To show the proper use of media the Federal Communications Commission wants to teach digital literacy by creating a digital literacy corps which is an informal national movement of student volunteers, the so-called digital literacy trainers. They go to schools and libraries to teach the productive uses of computers and computer skills. It is essential to learn the basic use of computers from the understanding of how to use web browsers, search engines and Powerpoint to the ability to evaluate online resources for trustworthiness of information kein Komma because you need it in many situations like for school or at work. Students have to be able to do research on the Internet Komma for example for presentations where it is important to choose the appropriate media to illustrate ones message. In addition, they should have the ability to distinguish between relevant from unimportant information. Adults should be introduced in contact with media as well Komma for example for job seeking. Furthermore, digital literacy improves employability because it is demanded by many employers when they first evaluate a job application. Moreover, the Internet can be advantageous to parents, too. In case they are in need of advice Komma they can get some on different web forums. Not only for personal advantages parents have to be taught in digital literacy but also for the protection and education of their children. One of their duty is to show their children how ...

Ein paar Fehler sind enthalten. Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.

Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com,

für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de.

:-) AstridDerPu

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Hier und da kleiner Fehler, aber sonst sehr gut !!!

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Respekt für denjenigen der das liest :D

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