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I spent 18 days here and I really enjoyed the time! They are very
friendly hosts! It was my first wwoofing experience and I could not
imagine a better place to stay! I did several projects around the house
with Matt (concreting mowing strips, painting the garage roof,…) and
some kitchen and general house work during rainy days with Emma. We
did some trips in the local area, f.e. a walk with their dogs Gyn and
Toyic in a reserve and a walk on the top of a mountain. It was great
I was invited to join the birthday party of their nephew and their brunch
with their friends. During the breaks (brakes sind Bremsen) or in the evening they teached me
backgammon and barbeau. The food was always gorgeous and their
self-made wine delicious! I  really recommend this place to you!

Kommentar von syncopcgda
16.02.2016, 09:16

was ist denn "wwoofing" ?

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Kommentar von KingLouis1
16.02.2016, 09:16

Besser wäre I spend here 18 days and I..... und they are friendly sollte mit you are very... beginnen.

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Kommentar von Tannibi
16.02.2016, 09:21

Es heißt "taught", nicht "teached".

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I spent 18 days here (Wort) and I really enjoyed the time! Tey (Wort) are very
friendly hosts! It was my first wwoofing experience and I could not
imagine  (Zeit)
a better place to stay! I did several projects around the house
with Matt (concreting mowing strips, painting the garage roof,…) and
some kitchen and general house work during raining (Wort) days with Emma. We
did some trips in the local area, f.e. (abbreviation) a walk with their dogs Gyn and
Toyic in a reserve and a walk on (= auf dem; to = auf den) the top of a mountain. It was great (kein Komma) that I could join the birthday party of their nephew  (besser: s-Genitiv) and their brunch with their friends. During the brakes (Wort) or in the evening (Plural), they teached (Grammatik) me backgammon and barbeau. The food was always gorgeous and their self-made wine delicious! I can really recommend this place to you!

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:-) AstridDerPu

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