Klingt mein Text gut auf Englisch?

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Hallo raeoverdose

Tut mir leid, dein Text weisst viele Grammatik- als auch Satzstellungsfeler auf.. Für was genau brauchst du den Text? Wenns nur um den Inhalt geht klappt das schon, ansonsten eher nicht.

As seen on Instagram, I was staying in the Park Hyatt Hotel in Hamburg and I want to review my amazing experience. My brother and I we checked in at 15pm. It was a really warm welcome and afterwards our room was presented to us. We immediately put on our sport clothes and wanted to to test the Hotels Gym. This was when I noticed that I've forgotten to take my sport shoes with me. The only shoes I've had were my winter boots which aren't really suited to work out with. But since the Hyatt Hotel is equipped with everything you can imagine, they kindly provided some shoes to me. After the workout we enjoyed a bath in the 20 meter swimming pool. The swimming pool and Spa are located ???on the lower floor???. A 4x4 meter hot tub, a sauna as well as a steam bath are also included. The room was very nice and equipped with modern furniture. Especially the bathroom was very luxurious! The breakfast was breathtaking. The choice was so vast that it wasn't really possible to decide for something particular. Therefore I had to taste just about everything. Thanks to the Park Hyatt Hotel Hamburg for our great stay

Lies es nochmals durch, hat wahrscheinlich noch 1, 2 kleine Fehler. Beim Spa wusste ich nicht genau wo des sein sollte, füll das noch richtig ein.

Hoffe das Hilft LG, JeX

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Kommentar von Fantastulous
11.02.2017, 16:27

Kleine Korrektur: 15PM gibt es nicht -> 3PM

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Dein Text kommt mir sehr bekannt vor - zumindest teilweise.

Nur, dass er auf deutsch war und es ums Hyatt in Düsseldorf ging.

Aber der Verfasser wünschte ebenfalls einen Blick auf Rechtschreib- und Grammatikfehler.

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Diese Frage hast du doch schon 2 Mal als solvi281 gestellt!

Auch was du korrigiert und angefügt hast

The Hyatt breakfast was (---) exactly what you get up after needs (Punkt) The
choice was so huge, I could not decide really. So (Hier fehlt das Subjekt.) just had to try everything.

ist genauso wenig Englisch wie der Rest.

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Kommentar von raeoverdose
06.02.2016, 23:22

hey astrid könntest du mir mailen dann muss ich hier die leute nicht belästigen! raeoverdose@gmail.com bitte bitte du bist eine große hilfe

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As you have noticed on Instagram, I was at the Park Hyatt in Hamburg and
wanna give you my hotel review for this amazing hotel chain. I checked
in with my brother at 3 pm. We were nicely welcomed and brought to our
room. Then we wanted put on our sport clothes immediately and take
advantage of the a little Hotel Gym but then I noticed that I had not have
my sports shoes with me. I had only my winter boots on me and
I could not continue my work out how it was ment to be. But since it was the Hyatt Hotel, we were equipped with everything we needed and were kindly provided with sports shoes. After gym we went to the 20-meter pool. It was
located on the lower floor in the Club Olympus Spa & Fitness Park
Hyatt Hamburg hotel. A large 4x4 meter hot tub, a sauna, as well as a
steam bath on top of that, were also included. The room was very nice and equiped with modern
furnishings. Especially the bathroom  looked very luxurious! The Hyatt
breakfast was just exactly what need after getting out of bed. There was an overwhelming amount of breakfast items to chose from, that I could not honestly decide what to take first. So I just  tried as much as i can.

My biggest gratitude to the Park Hyatt Hamburg for a great vacation.

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Kommentar von raeoverdose
06.02.2016, 23:37

sorry aber von der drüber ist besser

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Kommentar von kempi87
06.02.2016, 23:43

bitteschön

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Kommentar von kempi87
06.02.2016, 23:58

sag ma wofür brauchste das?

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As you have surely noticed: Du bist jetzt hier mit deinem sechsten Account unterwegs, lisavanderpump, xeniacaro usw. usw.

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Kommentar von earnest
08.02.2016, 13:06

Hinweis: "User ist inaktiv!"

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