Kann mir wer diese englische Zusammenfassung korrigieren?

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Vom Fragesteller als hilfreich ausgezeichnet

The Absolutely True Diay of a part time Indian´ is the abridged (Hier fehlt etwas.) adapted version (Präposition) the novel by Sherman Alexie and is about an Indian Boy (Komma) who is going on (Ausdruck; Zeit) a (RS) all-white-school (Punkt) In the first paragraph, Arnold is flirting with Penelope. She is telling him her dreams, but Arnold laughing at her. He is asking her (kein Komma)  what she really want (Grammar) to do with her life. Then she´s telling him (kein Komma) her real dreams. She´s wanting  (Grammar; Kurzformen in der Schriftsprache nicht verwenden.) to be a architect. Arnold doesn´t lauhging (Grammar) at her (kein Komma) because it's (s.o.) his drem (RS) too.

In the second paragraph (Komma) Arnold and Penelope are going with roger (RS) and his friends to a diner. He is ordering many things (Wort) for Penelope and him (Pronomen) . But he is sad (kein Komma) because he haven´t (Grammar; hier fehlt außerdem etwas) money. He is poor. As (Wort) Arnold going (Grammar) to the toilett (RS) he tells Roger that he has forget (Grammar) his wallet, but Arnold is lying. Roger is understanding (Grammar) and lending him the (Wort)  money. At (---) school (Komma) Penelope telling (Grammar) him (kein Komma) that she´s knwoing  (s.o., kein Komma, RS) that he has lending money from roger. (Grammar, Ausdruck, RS) She´s asking him (kein Komma) whether he is poor and he didn´t lying (Grammar) to her. Penelope telling (Grammar) it roger (RS) and he helping (Grammar) him in the future. Now Arnold knowing (Grammar) that he doesn´t need to lie.

Danke schonmal im vorraus,

Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.

Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com,

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Mit der Jetzt-Form ist das Present Simple  gemeint, so dass die Zeiten so ziemlich alle falsch sind.



Summaries werden in der Regel im Present geschrieben. Handlungen aus der Vergangenheit können aber durchaus auch im Past Simple und Present Perfect stehen.

- The summary is usually written in the present tense.

- But past events may be reported in the past, future events may be reported in the future.

- Statements or questions which were made in the past may be reported in the past tense or the past perfect.

- Statements and questions which were made in the past but concern the future may be reported in the conditional

(Quelle: kfmaas.de/summary0.html)

Für die Anwendung der anderen Zeiten im Summary gelten dieselben Regeln und Signalwörter wie in anderen Texten.

Die Zusammenfassung eines Sachtextes, der sich mit Geschichte befasst, steht im Simple Past, denn es handelt sich um in der Vergangenheit abgeschlossene Handlungen.

In eine Summary gehören nicht:

- Progressive / Continuous Tense

- Wörtliche Rede

- Zitate aus dem Originaltext

- Eigene Meinung, Gedanken und Kommentare

- Stellungnahme

- Schlusssatz

- Erzählerische Elemente, z.B. suddenly, unfortunately, at long last …

Zur Länge gibt es keine Vorgaben, man sagt über den Daumen gepeilt 1/5 des Originaltextes.

Tipps und Wendungen zu englischen Summaries findest du unter folgendem Link:ego4u.de/de/cram-up/writing/summary

Beispiele und Übungen findest du, wenn du bei Google - sample summaries oder exercises English summary eingibst.


Schön, dass dir meine Antwort gefallen hat und danke für das Sternchen!



`The Absolutely True Diay of a part time Indian´ is the abridged adapted version from the novel by Sherman Alexie and is about an Indian Boy. who is going on a all-white-school In the first paragraph, Arnold is flirting with Penelope. She is telling him her dreams, but Arnold laughing at her. He is asking her, what she really want to do with her life. Then she´s telling him, her real dreams. She´s wanting to be a architect. Arnold doesn´t lauhging at her, because it´s his drem too.

In the second paragraph Arnold and Penelope are going with roger and his friends to a diner. He is ordering many things for Penelope and him. But he is sad, because he haven´t money. He is poor. As Arnold going to the toilett, he tells Roger that he has forget his wallet, but Arnold is lying. Roger is understanding and lending him the money. At the school Penelope telling him, that she´s knwoing that he has lending money from roger. She´s asking him, whether he is poor and he didn´t lying to her. Penelope telling it roger and he helping him in the future. Now Arnold knowing that he doesn´t need to lie.

Danke schonmal im vorraus, Mylania Ps: Die Aufgabe war ein Text zusammenzufassen und das in der Jetzt Form

'Summary' von 'Snakeman von Paul Davenport'

Ich muss morgen eine Klausur über dieses Buch schreiben. Ich will euch eine Summary über das Buch schreiben

bitte tipps

In this book Cathy, the new pupil at Portland High is threaten by the Snakeman and his gang.

Cathy, who comes from New York, is new at Portland High. First, she meets Jamie and he interwiews her, because Jamie is in the newspaper-team. Later she knows Gorden Baker, but she calls him Snakeman, because he is big and slim. The Snakeman and his gang threaten Cathy, they extort money from her and want to hurt her and her brother Mike. Mike is jounger than Cathy. She tries the non- resistance tactic, but it does not work. Later, Cathy tells her problem to Jamie and her mother, Eileen.                                                                                Jamie asks Cathy to be in the newspaper-team and she says ok. They want to go to police, but they haven't any proof. Then they want to publish an article about the Snakeman and his gang, but Ms. Southerland, the boss of the newspaper-team rejects it! Later they publish the article without the permission from Ms. Souterland and they must to go to Dr. Callahan, the principal. The mayor(Bürgermeister) comes to Dr. Callahan and says that he likes the newspaper. They have a press conference. They make Quotes with the other victims of Snakeman.

Finally, they get a massage that the Snakeman is died. bewerten bitte

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Kann mir jemand dieses Summary korrigieren?

The text 'A life in the day' is written by a 27 years-old man who called Skinnyman and lives in north London. It's a interview in which he describe his course of his day. First he tells that he is addicted to cannabis. He provides the dealer, who make money with the addicts. Because the addicts have'nt got money, they were get guns from dealers to get money for the drugs. His lifestyle is'nt normal, because he don't go sleep when it'snormal. It is indifferent when he sleeps and when he wakes up. Also he mentions that he gets a record deal. He loves music and mostly he writes his lyrics in the night, when he has the best ideas. Because of his record deal he has many haters in the ghetto. Most of the people are jealous because thay think that Skinnyman has money, but it isn't the truth. His life is very problematic. He has often problems with the police and other authorities. But it doesn't cares him. He thinks that only his father can tell him what to do, but he left him and his mother early. Also he explains that all his friends went to prison, so he decides to go another way. Nevertheless he have to go to prison for 2 years, but he did 12 months. The reason for that was a conflict with a memeber of London Underground staff. In conclusion he did it and now he wants to held other young kids. So all in all he loves this place, because it's his home. Therefore he doesn't want to leave.

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Sind die Zeiten so korrekt? ( Englisch / the apple tree / on the beach)

Hallo, Wäre super, wenn da jemand drüberlesen und die Zeiten (und auch alles andere) verbessern könnte. Komme da immer durcheinander. Es geht um die Bücher On the Beach und The apple tree.

Ich schreibe die fragen mal mit auf:

1. At the beginning at the novel, Moira Davidson drinks a lot of alcohol and is a real party girl, but she changes during the novel. How does he change and why does she change? = Moira Davidson changes her life during the novel because she gets to know Dwight Towers. She likes him very much. I think she wants to change her life for him and maybe she thinks Dwight will marry her if she stops drinking alcohol. Furthermore she understands that life is too short and she has to change her life before she will die of the radiation.

2. Dwight Towers spends a lot of his time with Moira, but he does not take her with him when he sails out to sink his submarine at the end of the story. Why does he not take her with him? = Dwight Towers is of the opinion, that everybody must die in their own way. He is a Navy Commander and wants to die in his submarine with his crew. Another reason why he doesn't take Moira with him is the admiration for his dead wife. I guess he thinks that i will be wrong to die in the arms of another woman.

3. Mary makes plans for her garden and they talk to each other as though life is going on. Why do they behave like that? Give reasons. = I guess they behave like that because it is hard to accept that they will die. Mary Holmes finds it difficult to know that her little daughter Jennifer maybe dies before her. In her despair she tries to ignore the reality and tries to enjoy the last days with her family.

4. Have you got an ambition that you would like to fulfil? What is it? Give reasons. = Of course I have an ambition that I would like to fulfil. There are two big dreams which I never lose sight of. One of them is to become a doctor for human medicine. I wants to study it for more than ten years and I will do everything to let it come true. I know the study is very hard and that I must have a good average to authorize for the study but it is my dream job. I think it is an indescribable feeling to help people and make them healthy and happy.

My second dream is to own a horse. I ride since I was six years old and I am of the opinion that horses are the most beautiful animals in this world. They have such an elegance and their are like friends to me. But horses are so expensive and they take so much of your time. At first I want to have a good job and then I would like to buy a Friesian horse. I am sure that I will own a horse one day.

Part 2: 1. There are two apple trees in the story. Which characters do you think they represent? Give reasons. = The two apple trees stand for two women in the protagonist's life. The first one represents his wife Midge and the second one rep

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Englisch Referat: Kann sich jemand den Text zur Kontrolle durch lesen?

Also hallo erstmal!

ICh halte bald eine Buchvorstellung in Englisch und wollte fragen ob sich jemand vielleicht mal mein Text durchlesen kann. Wäre echt nett!

hier ist der text:

The Story Looking for Alaska tells about a boy, called Miles Halter. At the very beginning of the book Miles lives with his parents in Florida where he also goes to school. At school he’s an outsider and doesn’t really have friends, so he spends most of the time reading biographies of famous people remembering their last words. Miles reads a book about François Rabelais whose last words were: I go to seek a Great Perhaps. Miles doesn’t want to wait until he dies to start seeking a Great Perhaps so he decides to leave his old school and go to Culver Creek, an Alabama boarding school, where his dad went to when he was young. At Culver Creek, Miles meets his roommate Chip, nicknamed ‘the Colonel’, and Alaska Young, a beautiful, rebellious girl Miles is immediately attracted to. As Miles is so skinny Chip decides to call him ‘Pudge’. Miles also meets Takumi, a Japanese boy. Chip, Takumi and Alaska become Miles new friend as they accept him the way he is. At Culver Creek there is a kind of a war between the so called Weekday Warriors, the children of wealthy families who return home every weekend, and those who actually live at school. They all play pranks on each other pretty often, but more about that later. On the first school day Miles get to know Dr Hyde, the teacher for World Religions, and Miles immediately likes him. In the afternoon Alaska, Chip and Takumi show Miles the ‘Smoking Hole’. The ‘Smoking Hole’ is a safe place to smoke without being caught. It’s obvious that Miles likes Culver Creek, because he has got new friends. The days go by without much happening. But then one day Alaska tells Miles that she has found a girlfriend for him, so she plans a triple date with her and her boyfriend Jake, Chip and his girlfriend Sara, and Miles and Lara. Lara is from Romania and really nice. The date isn’t as successful as they hoped it would be, because while watching a basketball game at the gym, Miles is hit by a ball. He has a concussion, vomits on Lara’s jeans and is then taken to a hospital. But also for Chip it doesn’t go well because at the end of the triple date Sara breaks up with him. The days after the date are really weird. Alaska is never around and doesn’t talk to anybody. Miles notices that Alaska is a really moody girl, one second she’s nice and flirty and in the next one she freaks out without even having a real reason. In the morning, Dr Hyde gives the students the question for their final exam: What is the most important question human beings must answer? A few days before Thanksgiving Alaska wakes Miles up early to persuade him to stay at school with her over Thanksgiving. Miles first isn’t sure but then calls his parents telling them he has to study for exams, which is a lie. Alaska and Miles are nearly the only students staying at Culver Creek o

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