Für die Realschulprüfung sollen wir eine Reise planen, doch da ich besonders in Grammatik nicht so gut bin und meine Sätze auf eher unterem Niveau sind, könntest Du den Text kurz lesen? Und falls man manche Sätze besser, richtiger, oder "professioneller" formulieren könnte, es als Antwort schreiben !Danke! schonmal!!! :)
My summer trip
First we go by car to france, Avingnon than we'll be travelling by plane to spain more precisely to Malaga.
My parents, my siblings, my aunt, my uncle, my cousins, three friends of mine and me will drive to Avingnong. The petrol and the motorway toll will costs about 500 €. We start at the 30.05.12 very early in the morning and we`ll drive overnight, so that we arrive the Campingplace les trois rivieres at the 01.06 circa at 03:00 a clock in the afternoon. Five weeks we'll stay there, but after two and a half weeks my family drive back home and my friends and me will stay there another two and a half weeks alone. Just for me the residence cost for the whole five weeks 218,75 €.
For the food and other stuff we've planned 380 €.
When I was little I was at the same campingplace three times or thereabouts, so I know how it is there and I really think we'll mostly stay in or at the river, but if we don't, maybe we could visit the old town from Avingnong, visit markets and we could go shopping.
We'll take a taxi from Avingnong to the airport in Toulon and go by plane to Malaga at 01:16 in the afternoon, the flight costs 749,47 € and arrive at 11:05 at night in spain. We'll stay three weeks in the hostel „Casa Babylon Backpackers“ for 315 € per person, Breakefest inclusive.
For the food and other stuff I've planned 210 €.
We want to visit the cathedral „Santa Iglesia Catedral Basílica de la Encarnación“, the fortress „Alcazaba“, the museums „Museo del Vidrio y Cristal de Malaga“ and „Museo Carmen Thyssen“, also we want to visit the botanical gardens „ Jardín Botánico-Histórico La Concepción“, thereon I'm especially look forward.
The fly back to Germany starts at the 05.07.12 at 07:00 o'clock in the morning. During the journey are 6,45 hours stay in Barcelona, I think there is a little time, to have look at the city.
At 6 a clock in the evening we arrive at the Hamburg airport. This flight costs 125 €.
Altogether this trip will costs in the order 2498,22 €.
And maybe I manage to convince my parents, that we really make this voyage this summer.