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hello mum, I am scared of the boot camp! You CANT IMAGINE what they do TO your own child. With your flesh and blood. Its terrible... Its
the first day here and they ALREADY hit me. The carer are terrible people they
scare me and shout at me. I want to run away from here but it is
impossible! I do not eat anything because I feel very uncomfortable. I
miss my home, my friends and my family…! I know that I
ve been
MEAN to you and my little sister and that was wrong and I know that
stealing is wrong. I know, but why DID you TAKE me to this camp? Im sorry for all that Ive done but you made a BIG MISTAKE wich Ill
never forget! I feel alone and mistreated. Was that your goal mum?!?! \\
I want to come back home an I promise I will never again do something
wrong but please get me out of here. Mum I hope that it isn
t to late to say sorry because I need my family NOW MORE THAN EVER BEFORE.




so hört es sich bisschen korrekter an. Bin aber auch kein Profi :)

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Statt error solltest du mistake schreiben. "wich" gibt es auch nicht, korrekt wäre "which".

I know, but why do you took me to this camp. --> I know, but why did you take me to this camp?

I want to come back home an I promise I will never again do something wrong --> I want to come back home and I promise I will never do something wrong again.

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