Kann mir jemand bei der Korrektur dieses Textes behilflich sein?

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Introduction

As requested, I have prepared a report on our current self-access
learning project in our class. I have already done some of the task and
would like to evaluate this project from the perspective of a student.

Current situation

At the moment, every student of the 7A is involved in this project.
Due to intensive working with the tasks, my vocabulary extended
and I think I also improved my speaking skills. The project has many positive aspects, but I still feel unsure doing writing tasks
about topics I didn’t think about before. While doing the task, I often
felt stressed because there were a lot of subtasks in them. I found the project
itself a good thing, but I did not like that we had to talk to you in
so many tasks. I would have felt better if I had the possibilityto talkl to a
student because then I would not be so afraid to make mistakes.

Suggestions

Students differ in terms of motivation, speed and way
in which they acquire the target language. A self-access learning
project allows them to work at a pace that suits them. Students are free
to spend as much time as they like on a task and they can move to a new
task if they want to. To sum up, I strongly recommend that self-access
projects should be included in the lessons more often. It’s a fantastic
way to improve ones language skills and become better in speaking and
writing. Furthermore it’s a great way to expand one’s vocabulary.

Dafür, dass du in der 7.Klasse bist, ist der Text sehr gelungen und kohärent. Deutlich über dem Niveau, dass in dieser Klassenstufe normal ist. Mach weiter so! ^^

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Kommentar von lenar1234
22.01.2017, 20:28

Vielen lieben Dank! Lg

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Introduction

As requested, I have prepared a report on our current self-access learning project in our class. I have already done some of my task and would like to evaluate this project from the perspective of a student.

Current situation

At the moment, all students of the 7A are involved in this project. Through intensive discussion about the task, my vocabulary increased and I think I improved my speaking skills. There are many positive aspects of this project, but I still feel unsure doing writing tasks about topics I haven't thought about before. While doing the task I often felt stressed because there were a lot of tasks. I found the project itself a good thing, but I did not like that we have to talk with you in so many tasks. I would have felt better if I could have talked to a student instead, because then I would not be so afraid of making mistakes.

Suggestions

Students are different in terms of motivation and speed and the way in which they acquire the targetted language. A self-access learning project allows them to work at a pace that suits them. Students are free to spend as much time as they like on a task and they can move to a new task if they want to. To sum up, I strongly recommend that self-access projects should be included in the lessons more often. It’s a fantastic way to improve one’s language skills and become better in speaking and writing. Furthermore it’s a great way to expand one’s vocabulary.

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Kommentar von lenar1234
22.01.2017, 20:23

Vielen Dank! LG

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Schäm dich.

Die "Suggestions" beispielsweise sind abgekupfert.

Das merkt jeder Lehrer auf 10 Meilen gegen den Wind.
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