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Hi Ben,

I´d like to tell you about the beautiful city Sydney. There are so many amazing sights! The Sydney Opera House was the most impressive one. The person who´d designed it was a danish architect. Then I visited the Sydney Harbour Bridge where a man told me, that the building process lasted for 8 years! At least I visited the Sydney Aquarium, a friend gave me the idea. He said that there are approximately 650 different kinds of fish. The shark was so big and he looked so dangerous! You have to come to Sydney when you get the chance!

I hope to see you soon. 

Please reply to me as quick as possible.



KEIN Komma nach "told me" !

"At least" heißt "wenigstens". Hier aber muss "At last" oder "Finally..." stehen.

Nach "Aquarium" PUNKT. Danach muss ein NEUER SATZ beginnen.


Hi Ben,
I want to tell you about the beautiful City Sidney. There are so many beautiful sights. The Sydney Opera House was the most beautiful one (the person who has designed it was a danish architect). Than i visited the Sydney Harbour Bridge. A man told me that the building took 8 years long to be built! At last i visited the Sydney Aquarium. A friend gave me this idea. He said that there are about 650 different kinds of fish. The shark was so big, and he looked so dangerous. You must come to Sydney!
I hope to see you soon. Please write back!!

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Danke ;) aber warum hat albinofuchs fast was anderes geschrieben als du ? Hast du Fehlers gemacht also nicht aufgepasst oder der?


Und kabeltante1266 hat was ganz anderes geschrieben ? Was ist los?


In Kabeltantes Text sind leider einige Fehler. So erklären sich die Unterschiede.


Aha ok , und in albinofuchs?


Ist der Liebesbrief so ok?

Hallo erstmal :) Also wir sind jetzt seit fast zwei Jahren zusammen (jetzt beide 16 Jahre alt) und ich schreibe ihm immer mal wieder so kleine Liebesnachrichten und diesmal hab ich halt eine etwas längere geschrieben und wollte wissen wie ihr sie findet. Es tut mir leid dass es in Englisch ist aber er kann nicht so gut deutsch. Danke schon mal :)

i want you to know that in the last year I've fallen deeply in love with you. there are no words to express the feeling I feel in my heart that you came into my life, and how you make every day you’re with me so special. you are my absolutely everything but you know that <3 You are my best friend, my one true love, my one and only. I love you more today than I did yesterday, and I'll love you more tomorrow than I do today it’s incredible i cant even believe its possible to love you more than i already do but you make the impossible possible <3 Loving you is the only thing that makes life worth living. Day by day, my love for you becomes overwhelming, and I can't handle it when I don't see or even talk to you every day. A day without you in my life is like a day without sunshine, a day without food, or a day without air. I need you when I’m cold to keep me warm; I need you in the rain to keep me dry; I need you in my life to keep me happy. You make me feel wonderful. You give me strength when I just can't carry on and I truly treasure that. Every moment spent together is another one of my dreams coming true. I'm afraid I'll say something to make you forget the feelings you have for me when I bring up stupid things. I'm worried you won‘t want me anymore cause love you with everything I have. I was scared to love you at first, out of fear that you would hurt me, but I did and it’s the best thing I’ve ever done. Now, the only fear I have is waking up and realizing it’s all a dream. You are the most wonderful thing that has ever happened to me. Each moment that you and I spend together is so magical that I catch myself smiling for no reason at all. I thought that I would never find a love that is as strong as ours, cause there were times i never even believed anyone could ever love me i was fat ugly and everybody hated me but then you came along and changed my life :*** Baby, you complete me. You make my life so amazing and my world is a better place to be because of you. You make me feel beautiful. Thank you for giving me so much more than I ever could have wanted. I am so thankful for what we have, and for everything we will have. I could never imagine what it would be like if we were to lose each other. I don't even want to think about it. All I want to think of is you. I hope that message wasn't all too long :P

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Kann man statt… auch … schreiben We managed to get there on time, despite the delay oft he bus. Statt…the late arrival…?


Kann man statt… auch … schreiben? We managed to get there on time, despite the delay oft he bus.

Statt…the late arrival… She did not hand in help with the homework

Statt…not give me very much …?


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Was könnte ich in dem Aufsatz ,,My dream job" noch schreiben?

Hallo leute, ich habe einen Aufsatz auf englisch geschrieben der über mein Traumberuf handelt. Ich muss 15 Sätze haben aber ich habe nur 11 Sätze. Kann mir jemand helfen noch 4 Sätze dazu zuschreiben? Ich bin übrigens 14 und habe sicher irgendwo fehler in dem Text!

My dream job:

I'd like to become a primary school teacher. There are postitive and negative aspects in the job. The job is well paid and you have breaks during the lessons. The good thing about the job is that it is not dangerous at work. One thing else is that you have long summer holidays. You don't work on the weekend and you have fixed working hours, however, the job has also negative aspects. The bad thing about this job is that you have stress and that you have to have patient. In the class are sometimes disrespectful pupils and they don't listent to you. That's why it may be that there is noise in the class. At home you have to control the homework of the pupils and have stress because you have to work quickly. A big problem for me is to get up early. But if you want to become that job, you will get used to it.

Ich weiß da sind Fehler drinnen aber ich bin kein Profi! Kann mir also bitte jemand helfen noch 4 Sätze zu schreiben?

Danke an die Leute die das durchgelesen haben und mir antworten :)

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englisch tagebucheintrag?

Dear diary, Why, why, why? How should I start? Maybe like this: Dear diary, today, it was the best day in my life by now? I’m feeling very, very, very good? Or I believe I can fly? But no. That would be a lie. A big lie. Better I can write something like that: Dear diary, I’m feeling so bad. My whole life. My whole life will never be the same again? I try to understand why it happened. Why or how did it happen that he react like that? And why do I feel like this now? Maybe I can understand it better when I write it down and think about it. Because I don’t want to be in a situation like this in the moment. Never in life! So first. Do you still know Rob? I’ve told you form this person. Last time. Only good things. But now, you can forget all these things. Or the most of them. So. We wanted to go away. Move to London. Only the two of us. We wanted to live and work there but that was before I noticed that I was pregnant. I told him that I was pregnant, of course. Directly. Although I was extremely afraid of his reaction. And I was right. He said that he wasn’t ready to be a father. Yes I know. But I wasn’t ready to become a mother, too. And I must say. Who is ready to be a mom or a dad with 23? Indeed, an abortion was no question for me! He could go to work. Get the money. Maybe we could marry soon. (At this time I was optimistic. To optimistic.) I tried to change Robs mind. Somehow. That he says yes. Of course. It’s okey. I’ll look after our baby and help you. At last Rob and me we both are guilty. But. No. Of course. He kept saying: “What about my life and my choice?” He thought, we would fight all the time. And an abortion was the best option in our situation. But finally it is my body, my life. So it’s my choice. My choice of I want an abortion or not. All in all he doesn’t came clear (er kam nicht damit klar) that I don’t want to rid of our baby. So he left me. In the 4th month. Pregnant! From that time I don’t speak to him anymore. I hate him for that that he left me alone with the baby. With OUR baby. He said now he feel really guilty about it. But. Yes of course! I only never noticed it before! He was egoistic like a selfish monster which doesn’t care about anyone other. Except him! I don’t think that he think only one time!! Only one time what I’m feeling now. And… No okey I don’t want to become absorbed in this part. So I don’t want to get money from him. He isn’t the father of my daughter. He is only the one who made me pregnant. Now I’m living with my parents. And I really don’t know what I would do without them…

richtige zeit? oder hat jemand verbesserungsvorschläge?

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