"Sir [Name] is well known amongst the humble folks of his country, having gathered their trust and respect through victory in various war battles against great rivals by faithfully protecting the kingdom like he had sworn on the day he got granted with the title of a knight, thus proving his loyalty towards the Royal Family and the [Name] Kingdom. He further is responsible with the training and disciplining of soldiers and young pages and squires, who work hard to become the honorable knights of the next generation, just like him. However, [Name] prefers not to partake in government business since it's not his place and concern anyway. The only purpose he has is to always stay loyal to his King, who he sees as the big brother he never had."
Ich würde gerne eure Verbesserungsvorschläge zu dem Text oben wissen, ich habe nämlich das Gefühl es gibt noch paar Sachen zu verbessern.
PS: Bitte ignoriert die eckigen Klammern, wo "Name" drin steht, es ist im Moment nicht relevant. ^-^