Kann jemand sehen ob ich Fehler gemacht habe in Englisch BITTE brauche HILFE?
Guten Abend, Ich hab morgen eine kurze (2min) Präsentation und ich weiß nicht ob die Grammatik stimmt. Kann einer Bitte schauen und sagen ob ich Fehler gemacht habe. Ich wär MEGA Dankbar wenn jemand das schauen könnte. Hier der Text:
Hello, Today I want to give you a short presentation about the Sydney Harbour Bridge. The Sydney Harbour Bridge is 1.1 km long, 49m wide and 134m tall. The Bridge join north with south Sydney. The start of construction was July 1923 and the end of construction was Janurary 1932. So it takes 11 Years to buildt this Bridge 3 Months after the construction ends the S.H.B was officially open on March 1932. The Bridge consists of steel and the architects were ... and .... The Harbour Bridge was buildt by 1400 constructers from that 16 died in the Building of the Bridge. It has got 8 road tracks from that 1 for bus, 2 railway track and 1 for bike and foot path. The S.H.B is the sixth-longest spanning-arch bridge in German ''Bogenbrücke'' on earth. Beside to the famous Sydney Opera House ist the Harbour Bridge often called as another landmark in Sydney. Maybe you have seen in TV that every Year on New Year there is a big firework over the Bridge that's one of the many Attractions on the Harbour Bridge like the famous Bridge Climb where you can Climb with a Group and a guide.
That was presentation about the Sydney Harbour Bridge. Any Questions?
Vielen Riesigen Dank im Voraus
*it took 11 years
*3 months after the end of construction
*and 16 of them died
*8 road tracks, 1 of them ist for bus, 2 are railway tracks and 1 is a bike and footpath
*besides the opera house
Das wären so die Fehler, die ich korrigieren würde. Trotzdem keine Garantie auf Richtigkeit.
the bridge connects north with south würde ich schreiben
Z.3 joins ; the construnction; in July/January
Z4ff. took, the brigde; ended, opened, in March, by that, main attr.,in a group, the pres.
So ungefähr.. lg