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If you life (Wort) in a village you know each other (Wort) better because a village is smaller than a big city. In a big city nobody knows each other (s.o.) and a lot of people who live there live very isolated (Ausdruck). In (Hier fehlt etwas.) village the news are very fast spread (Ausdruck, Grammatik) because there are less people compared to a big City (RS).
On the one hand when you live in a village you have no private life and
almost everyone knows  what you do.
On the other hand when you live in a big city you are anonym (Wort). Also (kein Satzanfang), there is no doubt about it that the air in (---) cities is more polluted by exhaust fumes than in a small village because in a village (Hier fehlt etwas.) is not many (Grammatik) traffic. You are linked more closely to (---) nature and the connection (Welche bzw. wessen Verbindung?) to a village is very big (Wort). Furthermore, it seems to ne (RS( that many people live from their own cultuvation (Ausdruck). In addition, (---) animals can live more appropriate (Grammatik) than in a big city. Finally, living in a village is sometimes cheaper because the Tages (???) are not so expensive.

Hier nur die gröbsten Fehler. Daneben fehlen ein ganze Reihe Satzzeichen.

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:-) AstridDerPu

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