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In the following I'm going to deal with the problem of eating disorders there are many people who suffer from it especially girls because they want to have a good figure and don't want to increase. in my opinion it's a serious illness and should be taken seriously by people. we should help these people who have the illness to strengthen their self-confidence
the first point is that everybody should accept their body as it is because everyone is beautiful in their own way
they should stop to eat nothing to get a nice body it has many disadvantages for example it is not good for the body because you're not feed it enough and this harms the body
the second point to mention is that people who have this illness should find a good solution to solve their problem for example they could create a nutrion plan in which they can write how much to eat daily
or they can do sports because so they can improve their Illness and self-confidence . in conclusion I would like to say that I agree with the man and think that eating disorders are serious mental illnesses that need treatment and sympathetic medical help
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