Kann jemand bitte meinen englische Text zu "American Dream" korrigieren?

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.........................of every American citizens(for every American citizen). He also describes the American Dream as the equal(as equal opportunities) opportunities for every American citizens (citizen - das ist doch Singular) to go from “rags to riches” as long as they work hard to achieve aims (to achieve their aims). In the following (What? Essay? Summary?) I will assess Livian’s definition of the American Dream. On one side there are many stories of people who succeeded despite the economy (What about the economy?, In decline? being successful?) crime, poverty, poor education, and less than ideal homes, for example Bill Gates, President Obama, Mark Zuckerberg, etc. This proves that the US society is a classless society, where everybody can move up and succeed and (and your social background)social background does not decide on where you end up. The State has only few influences on each individual(The State has very little influence on the individual). As a matter of fact, communism or socialism never had a chance to spread in the US.(Na, und? Why not) Furthermore, the American Dream provides hope and encourage (and encourages people) people to give their best and fulfil their dreams. This can lead to a reduction of th............

Soll ich weitermachen oder hattest du was anderes erwartet?

Kannst du bitte weitermachen? (falls du Zeit hast) Danke im Voraus

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@puppy0700

Tue ich gerne.

.......and this is achievable by all... On the other hand, the American Dream might not seem as beautiful as it is made out to be.In the current economic clime many Americans have lost..........lower median income than, for example, Asian (Americans????).....................that not everybody has the same opportunity - although this is what the Constitution guarantees. Moreover, the emphasis on individual responsibility in American society......leads to disasters (Which ones?)...........In conclusion, I would say I agree only partially................In my view, depending on WHO (nicht whom - "wer du bist")..........may be more achievable for some than others.

Das ist nur meine Version, wie es sein sollte. Ich bin sicher, dass Andere es kommentieren werden und vielleicht Fehler finden, welche ich übersehen habe. Übrigens, danke für das "Danke".

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