Ist dieser Text in englisch richtig?
My name is ******. I’m 14 years old and live in ******, a very small and rural village in Hessen, Germany. ******* has only 68 inhabitants, including my brother, my mother and me. We live in a red Swedish wooden house at the edge of the village. My brother’s name is***** ,he is 17 years old and a very funny guy, he is going to the “Oberstufe”, it's like the senior highschool in Canada. My mother’s name is ***, she is a Physics and Biology teacher at my school. But we don't live alone, we have many pets, like a little zoo. First of all, there is Goty. Goty is a dog from Spain. Then there is Tintin, Tintin is our cat, it's a funny pet. We have three horses, too. Fabi, Popeye and Summerset. Finally we have six chickens, they don't have own names but they lay delicious eggs.
My hobbies are playing the piano, soccer, astronomy and meeting friends. Maybe astronomy sounds boring, but it's more interesting than you think. I play soccer by ********, it's the football club in our neighboring village, (village name). It's a lot of fun but sometimes really hard, but I think because of this I like it. Sometimes I go to the youth club on the weekend to meet friends and celebrate. Or I look movies or series like breaking Bad.
My school is the (long school name), in short NAO. I go to school by bus at 6:40 am, it takes 35 minutes to get there. School in German starts at 7:45 am. My favorite subjects are Chemistry, Physics, Biology and Math.
I like to go to Canada, because I want to practice my English. I think it's very important to be good at English, because people all over the world speak English. I also like the Canadian landscape, it's very impressive. I've heard that the people living in Canada should be very kindful and open-minded, so I want to meet them.
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Der Text ist Recht gut. Kleine Korrekturen wurden schon geschrieben. Ich halte rural village für doppelt gemoppelt, denn ein village ist immer rural. Die Schulfächer werden klein geschrieben.
Der Text enthält zwar ein paar Fehler, ist aber verständlich.
Hesse (ohne n)
I play soccer with .. (nicht "by")
he goes to / he attends the "Oberstufe"
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Kann mir jemanden diesen englischen Text berichtigen?
Hallo ich habe bald mündliche Prüfung in englisch und muss fünf Minuten etwas zu meinem Praktikum erzählen bis jetzt habe ich nur das hier :
I completed my Intership in the Kindergarten . I had to do start every morning at 8 o'clock and could go at 4 o'clock in the afternoon. On some days i was allowed to go earlier. I had to to everyday the same and after a short time it was very boring for me. I was sitting the whole day and played with the children. It was very loud in the group. Sometimes we went outside and played there. At the end of the day i had to clean the group and sweep the entrance hall. However now i know that i dont want to work in the kindergarten later. I'd like to have more variation in my job and new challenges and not everyday the same. At first i would like to continiue my education an then i would like to study
Was könnte ich noch dazu sagen , weil das sind keine fünf minuten die ich rede
A Dead Men´s Path- Summary
Heho, wollt mal fragen ob ihr mir kurz ne Rückmeldung bzw. Verbesserungsvorschläge für meine Zusammenfassung geben könnt.
Vielen Dank im Voraus :)
Chinua Achebe’s story “Dead Men’s Path” is about Michael Obi, a modern and ambitious young man who is appointed headmaster of the unprogressive Ndume Central School. It is in his interest to modernize the school and to broadcast his Western view of life. Therefore, supported by his wife Nancy, he wants to turn the schoolyard into a beautiful garden. But this task does not turn out as easy as he thought; all village people are walking on a path through the school premises. He finds out that this path is holy to the village people and that it connects the village shrine with the burial place. This is the kind of old-fashioned superstition Michael wants to wipe out, so he closes the path. Even when the Ani -the village priest- explains that this path matters a lot to the village people he refuses to open it up. Later on a woman from the village dies in childbirth and Michael finds the schoolyard devastated and one of the school buildings destroyed. And like coincidence wants, this is the day when the Supervisor is about to inspect the school. Because of the destroyed premises Michael receives a bad report and is blamed for causing a “tribal war”.
Ist dieses Introducing gut geeignet für eine mündliche Prüfung der 10.Klasse?
Ich habe Mittwoch eine mündliche Überprüfung in Englisch und muss mich am Anfang vorstellen. Ich würde gerne wissen, ob es irgendwelche Fehler in diesem englischen Text gibt, bzw. ob man irgendwas besser formulieren kann: Hello, my name is Franz Schmitt and I’m 14 years old. The reasons, why I’m in the 10th class are that I was send to school when I was five years old and that I skipped the 1st grade because I was unchallenged. I’m a singleton. My mother was born in Japan and my father is from Germany so that I speak German and Japanese at home. Therefore I visit the Japanese institute in Halstenbek, a corporation nearby Hamburg saturdays to keep my Japanese competence alive. My favorite subjects at school are P.E. and geography. What I also like at school are the midday breaks, where I can go to the canteen to have lunch with class mates. My hobbies are to meet up with friends to play soccer, to read books and to listen music. I especially like the genres House and Electro House. Otherwise I like to watch YouTube-Videos or to play strategic mobile games. Tuesdays I play basketball in a sports club, but it’s just for fun and there are no matches against other clubs. I don’t have a specified career aspiration yet, but I can imagine to work as a gymnasium teacher or something in the field of mathematics.
Danke im Voraus.
Bitte um Korrektur text about myself
Im folgendem text sind sicherlich grammatikalische fehler. Ihr würdet mir sehr helfen wenn ihr mir helft. danke im vorraus :)
Let me just briefly introduce myself before I start to tell you about my life and my future plans. My name is .... . The letters of my name describe me best: self-confident, easygoing, loyal, independent, natural and ambitious. Currently I live in Cottbus and attend the 11 th grade at the Humboldt-Grammar-School. I am 16 years old and have the best family. I love my grandmothe, grandfather, mum, dad and my one year younger brother. I don’t remember when we have argued the last time. In my freetime I love to talk with my friends about all unimportant topics and go to parties but to be active is also very important to me. That’s why I try to go jogging regulary. In former times I was a member of different sports clubs, e.g. gymnastics or athletics. If I have nothing to do, this means no homework, nothing to learn or other aktivities I love to relax if I watch TV. My strength are in team skills, reliability and self-reliance. In addition I’m very sociable and cooperative. Some of my less great properties are listlessness and reticence. Furthermore you can describe me as reserved, because to entrust myself to someone is difficult for me. Hitherto school wasn’t a big problem for me. My strengths are in scientific subjects, this includes mathematics or chemistry. Difficult for me ist German because there is another weakness of me: spelling and grammar. Therefore English and Polish isn’t easy to me, too. Occupations like journalist or copyreader are out of the question very early.
Englisch Introduce Yourself, passt das so?
Hello my Name .... Im 17 years old. I will be 18 next year. I live in Augsburg since 1998. This is the year when I was born. Exactly on 14th February. This is the valentins day. I have one older brother, he is 19 years old. An one younger Sister, she ist 12 years old. My brother has already done his apprenticeship as a mechatronic engineer. I am currently a student at the private Frenzel business school. My sister also attends school and is in the 6th grade. After my graduation, I would like to start a apprenticeship, but I don’t even found one. That’s why I must have to do part time jobs the whole year. My favourite food is kebap, and I like to drink cola. My favourite activities are playing football and meet friends. Currently I don’t have a driver license, but I will have it next year. My dream is to make a family and be financially free.
Thank you for your attention.
Wir müssen auf Englisch über uns 5 Minuten lang erzählen. Ist der Text so gut und was könnte ich noch zu meinen Hobbys sagen?
Ich want to toll you Something about me My Name is **** but my friends call me *** as a nickname. I am fifteen years old. I have a brohter and a sister there is my brohter the older and He is seventeen years old his Name is **** and my sister is the young so is my brohter eight years older as a my sister her Name is ***. My Parents are Fourty-four years old and my Mum is called *** AT the Moment she is housewife.My dad is called * * * * * and He works as a Firmenname. I live with my Familiy in **** where we live is a big house. MY familiy Come Form ***** all are born in ***** out of my sister our motherlangaue is french furthermore my Familiy and I live SinCe nine year the school in ***** so in my class we are eight pupil there are five boys and three girls. I like my School because I have many interesting subjects it are history and Germany but I don't like sport.In Summer I leave the school because it is my last school years and I want to finish a good exams in order to I go in the secandary school.My Hobby is Swimming because I can good swimming therefore me have it much fun.In Winter I like go schlicht skating when the Weather is Bad I read books and wach TV.In the Week I go swimming twice and Most weekend I Meeting with my friends we go shopping or chillen