Ich muss morgen einen Aufsatz in Englisch abgeben und ich wollte fragen, ob ihr Fehler findet (Vorwarnung: Ich schreibe nicht wirklich gute Aufsätze..)
Also, Aufgabe lautet folgende:
Write an answer to the letter. Write 120-150 words. Do not forget to use paragraphs. Say:
- what you think about the problem;
- if you have been in a similar situation and what you did;
- what you think the person should do/do not;
- who they could perhaps get help from;
Hier der Brief, an den ich antworten muss:
Dear Agony Aunt,
There is a teacher at my school who is making my life difficult. She's always picking on me. She tells me off for talking when I'm not. She gives me terrible marks for all my homework. She even sent me to see the headmaster the other day. I don't know why she's doing this. What can I do? I'm starting to hate school.
Don’t think it’s your fault! You haven’t done anything wrong.
I think you should speak to your teacher. I have been in a similar situation in school. One of my teachers prefered all the boys in my class but she really hated girls. For example she gave the boys very good marks for all what they done and they were allowed to do anything what they want without getting trouble! She gave the girls more homework as the boys and she was teasing us. When she started to call us names we went to the headmaster. He talked with her about the problem. She nearly was to losing her job but we forgive her when she said sorry for bully us. So the life in school was getting better in the next years and our teacher became really nice.
So, i want you to speak with the headmaster but you can get help from a teacher you can trust too.
I really hope for you it will help you and the teacher stops to pick on you. If nothing helped you should change your class.
Danke schon mal im Voraus ! (: