Ist dieser letter to the editor in Ordnung?

hallo , die aufgabe war einen letter to the editor zu schreiben über : englisch in der Grundschule zu haben in Deutschland .

Ich bin sehr schlecht in englisch ,aber in 10 tagen habe ich meine enligsch Fachabiturprüfung.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you after reading the article " English in the first year of primary school" which was written by Helen Ward and published in yesterday issue.

I approve the author's belief in that the children in Germany should start learning English in the first year of primary school.

First of all the education is very important .It's never to early to learning many languages .

My second argument is for the children it's important learning early because than they have it easier in the high school.

Another argument is than the children can be creative and they learn later languages earlier than a children have not learning a language in the primary school.

So, I think many parents will agree with me . Education is really important and more schools in Germany should thinking about learning languages in primary school.

Nina Müller, Köln

Was könnte ich besser machen ? Fehlen Satzzeichen ? ist der Aufbau okay ? Ist es zu kurz ?

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AstridDerPu

Community-Experte

Englisch

18.04.2020, 14:46

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you after reading (Grammatik) the article " English in the first year of primary school" (which was) (optional) written by Helen Ward and published in yesterday (Grammatik) issue.

I approve (Hier fehlt eine Präpositon.) the author's belief (---) that (the) (optional) children in Germany should start learning English in the first year of primary school.

First of all (Komma) (---) education is very important. It's never to (RS; Grammatik) early to learning (Grammatik) many languages. - (Es ist nie zu früh viele Sprachen zu lernen?)

My second argument is for (Formulierung) (---) children it's important learning (Grammatik) early because than (RS; Grammatik) they have it easier (denglish) in (Präposition) (---) high school.

Another argument is than (RS; Grammatik) (---) children can be creative and they learn later languages earlier than a children (Grammatik) have not learning (Grammatik) a language (Präposition) (---) primary school. - Diesen Satz musst du komplett neu schreiben, da er keinen Sinn ergibt.

So, I think many parents will agree with me. Education is really important and more schools in Germany should thinking (Grammatik) about learning (Wort) languages in (Präposition) primary school.

Nina Müller, Köln

Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.

Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com,

für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de - und Finger weg vom Google Übelsetzer und seinen tr.tteligen Kollegen!

Auf folgenden Seiten wird erklärt, wie man einen letter to the editor schreibt:

- fosbosenglisch.de/new/writing/letter/

- https://www.studienkreis.de/englisch/letter-to-the-editor/)

:-) AstridDerPu

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Ninanina123nina

Fragesteller

18.04.2020, 16:33

Barneyxwho

18.04.2020, 14:44

should start studying english

It's never to early to learn more languages.

My second argument is, for the children it's important to start studying from an early age because then it will be easier in high school.

Another argument is that they can be more creative and for those who already know a language it’s easier to learn another language in the future.

should think*

thinkING benutzt du nur bei etwas was in diesem augenblick passiert

und Punkt wird ohne abstand gesetzt.

viel glück

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earnest

18.04.2020, 14:56

-English

Argumentative Text English

Learning foreign languages is part of school. Pupils in Germany start learning the first one in primary school and the following middle-high school ads at least another. 'At least' because later in school you have to chose between another foreign language or a new subject which is provided by the school. Many pupils choose a new language which leads to them learning 3 foreign languages. Nearly at the end of school most of them deselct all foreign languages except one. So why spent your time and learn so many in the first place? In the following text I want to tell you why we shouldnt be required to have to learn so many.

English is the world language so it is enough to have only it as foreign language. Over 1 billion people speak english. The mosg popular foreign languages teached in school are french/spanish, italian and latin. But only around 300 milion speak french, 65 milion italian and latin is basically a dead language. You could speak english and more people would understand you than if youʻd speak another.

For many pupils school is already stressful and adding a new language makes it even worse. You have to learn new pronouns, words, how to conjugate and many rules. Having the languages sound familiar doesnʻt help, but only confuses. So doesn't it make more sense to only learn one foreign language and do it intensively so you can nearly speak it fluent, than to learn many and not being really good at any?

By choosing to do one thing you can't do another, it comes at the expense of something else. Or in other words: you can't have it all. If we spend our time learning languages which we will most likely forget later, we donʻt/canʻt spend our time with something we will actually need or do things we have a passion for. For example, I would love to not learn french in school and rather do more art classes, because I want to be a designer later. I would have more time at home to study for an other school subject or do things I enjoy doing.

Of course is knowing more languages probably better for career oppurtunities but it really depends on what you are planing on doing as a job. For some people it is probably better to know more languages but for others it isn't. Also are languages not the first thing they would decide of, if there are other things you are very good it.

In conclusion, schools should provide the possibilty for students to decide which languages they want and need to spend their time on and what they don't. But of course all students would have do learn at least one foreign language, to which english would be the best option.

Hätte jemand vllt auch eine Idee für einen Titel? Und vllt auch irgendwelche Ideen für Formulierungen, so dass der Text ein bisschen komplizierter klingt? :)

Vielen dank schonmal!!

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Englisch Traumberuf

Hallo! Ich muss für Englisch eine Zusammenfassung über einen Beruf schreiben. Ich habe schon eine geschrieben.. Wie findet ihr diese? Bitte auf Fehler hinweisen! Danke

My dream job is a nursery-school teacher. They works in a nursery school and looks after kids from 0-6 years. Their job is the childs spends time and their talents supports. I like this job because I love children. A nursery school teacher erans 1500 euro. In three months I will go to the Bakip. There I get a education for a nursery -scholl teacher and besides the examination . So I can, when I want study.

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Richtiger Satzbau in (Englisch)?

-This statement is false because children´s learn a few of important skills if they play. As exampel they are learning exploring

-This statement is false because toys don´t have to be expensive. It is sufficient if children get cardboard boxes in the backyard.

-some parents want to know which toys to which age fit

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Themen für "letter to the editor".

Wir schreiben morgen eine Klassenarbeit in Englisch und müssen einen "letter to the editor"; also einen Leserbrief schreiben.

Weiß jemand vielleicht ein gutes Thema dafür, das auch aktuell ist?

Vielen Dank für Eure Antworten schonmal im Voraus.

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Gastfamilienbrief?

Hallo,

ich wollte fragen ob ihr meinen Gastfamilienbrief zur Kontrolle lesen könntet. Meine Familie kann das nicht da sie kaum englisch sprechen.

Dear host family,

First of all I want to thank you for reading my letter and giving me the opportunity to live a year in the USA. To make your decision easier I want to give you a little impression about who I am.

My name is (xxx), I'm sixteen years old and I live in Germany.

My family that means my mom, my dad, my sister, our dog and our cat are an important point in my life and i spend a lot of time with them.

In my freetime I like to cook and bake. I do cardio and weight training reguarly.Next to sports I'm interested in photography, reading books, singing and writing my own songs, travel to different countries, eating my cakes and like every normal teenager meeting my friends. But sometimes I like to just relax and take a nap.

I am looking forward to my first American school day. Here in Germany the school is a little bit different than in the USA. In Germany there aren’t usually sport clubs after school. I especially like schools in the USA because they often offer a bunch of after school activities like cheerleading, which I really want to try, or other clubs.

Right now I’m in the 11th grade. My favorite subjects are English, representative play and art, but I’m not in an art class.

I like to try new things, find out about different cultures, people and languages. I think that living in the USA will be an awesome experience for me and that it will have a big influence on my life and personality. I hope that after the time in your family, the US will be a second home to me. I'm happy that I’ll soon get the chance to get to know the country and the American way of life.

Thank you for reading this letter. I hope you’re going to be my host family and if so, thank you very much!

dankeschön!

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tipps zu meiner presentation über school of the air

Hay also ich muss ein kurz Referat über School of the Air auf english machen und wollte fragen ob mir hier jemand bei meinen text tipps geben kann was da noch rein könnte weil der ziemlich kurz ist wie ich finde und glaube grammatisch ist er auch ziemlich schlecht :/

    School of the Air

The school of the air is a correspondence school for the primary and secondary education
of children who live in remote places  and in the outback of Australia. In these areas the  population is to small for a school.
On 8th June 1951 the first school of the Air lesson were officially broadcast from the Royal 
Flying doctor Service in Adelaide.There are  16 Schools of the air in australia the first   School of the air was built in Alice Springs.The School of Air in Alice Springs got a Visitor   Center that is open for tourists every day. There you can watch the morning broadcast from   the lessons
From 1951 to 2003 the teacher speaks to the students over shortwaveradios after that  they  switched to internet technologies to deliver lessons that include live videos.There are
        School of the air programmes in all states except Tasmania. Each student spends one hour    per day receiving group or individual lessons from the teacher,the rest of the day they     working through the     assigned materials with a parent,older sibling or a home stay  tutor.   The students get their homework through e-mails before that they get  the homework  from the post office together with books and other school stuff.Once a year the teachers    and     the students meet at a school camp for a week. There the studenst get intensive     lessons. the    most important thing in this week is that finally everybody can meet his classmates and     teachers.Studies have shown that such education has the same effect than traditional    methods of schooling.

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Letter to the editor (Zeitform)?

Schreibt man einen letter to the editor im Präsens oder im Präteritum ?

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Letter of motivation - kann jemand probelesen?

Hallo, Ich wurde bei einer Organisation für Freiwilligendienste im Ausland angenommen und jetzt muss ich mich bei den einzelnen Einsatzstellen bewerben. Dafür muss ich jeweils ein englisches Motivationsschreiben verfassen. Das erste habe ich jetzt fertig, jedoch habe ich mit damit echt schwergetan. Kann es vielleicht jemand probelesen und Verbesserungsvorschläge geben?

Das würde mir echt helfen und vielen Dank schon einmal im Vorraus. Habt keine Hemmungen so zu kritisieren, wie ihr es für richtig haltet.

Letter of motivation

Dear Ms XXX,

Hereby I apply for a position within your volunteer programm. My name is XXX and I am 18 years old. Currently, I am doing my Abitur, which is similar to the British A-Levels, at the XXX, a compehensive school in XXX, Germany.

After school, I would love to visit Amsterdam on the one hand to improve my personal soft skills, including learning a new language, experiencing a new lifestyle, living an more independant life, and taking reponsebility. One might suppose that there are no cultural differences between Germany and the Netherlands because they are so close, but I think, that I will get to know quite a different culture. On the other hand I want to do something usefull, something not only I will benefit from.

As working at a school contains a lot of work with children, it is very interesting for me and I really want to support your project. I already have some experience in working with children. The village I used to live in organises troughout the year different events for children, for example hiking or forest days and different handicraft activities. I was often involved in these events and helped to look after the children.

The fact that your school association is based on the Waldorf Pedagogy catched my interest in doing my voluntary service at the XXX with finality. In my opinion Waldorf Pedagogy is a really good form of educating children. This is why I want to learn more about it and I would like to experience it. I, for myself, have never been at an school like this but about three years ago I changed to the school I am recently at. That had an big impact on me because it is an school which focuses on the students to evolve their own personality. So I want to become a part of a team which allows children to evolve as the person they are and which benefits their creativity and other skills they are willing to learn.

I am not only good in interacting with children, but also I can do office work. In 2013, I had an 3-Week internship as clerk in public administration which came naturally to me. Additionaly I am always geared up to deal with something. It is no bother for me if I have to sweep the yard or to carry out repairs.

I would be very happy if I could do my volunteer service at the XXX and I think that I am suitable for this place of assignment.

Yours sincerely

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Argumente für und gegen: We can do more to make our school greener

Hey. Wir sollen in Englisch eine Argumentation schreiben zu dem Statement: We can do more to make our school greener. Fallen euch noch Argumente für und vor allem dagegen ein? For: important step bc our planet is beeing polluted with increasing amounts of waste, it's an important step to begin with changing sth in our daily lives like in school, especially students pollute a lot of rubbish so they should lern in school how to reduce it Against: we do enough already, it can restrict the students in a negative way

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English Summary and short story: "The Fun They Had"

Any mistakes? Any Verbesserungsvorschläge? P.s. Ist der Text nicht zu lang für eine Summary? Der orginal Text hat ca. 1042 Wörter.

The short story ‘The fun they had‘, written by Isaac Asimov deals with a boy and a girl, Tommy and Margie, who find out something about school in the past. On the 17th of March 2155 Tommy, a thirteen-year-old boy, finds a ‘real book‘ which has been printed on paper. He is at the house of Margie, an eleven-year-old girl. They both take a look at it togehter. The book is really old and the pages are yellow and crinky. In the year 2155 this kind of books do not exist anymore. In this time words are moving on a television screen. These televisions can contain over a million of boks. That is the reason, why Tommy thinks that they are much better. He has found the old book in the attic of his house. While reading, Tommy says that it is about school. Margie hates school and cannot understand why someone would write about it. She was having problems with learning geography from her ‘mechanical teacher‘. It was black, large and had a screen on it. It teaches the students, gives them exercises and askes them questions, all in a special room in their own house. It can also calculate the marks in no time. Margie hates the slot where she has to insert her homework or test papers. Once the geopraphy sector of her mechanical teacher was geraded too quick, so that her marks got worse and worse. The County Inspector rebuilt it after one hour. He was really nice to Margie. She hopped that her mechanical teacher would be taken away for a longer time, like Tommy’s was, because it’s history sector blanked out completly. Tommy says that the book which he has found, is not about their type of school, it is about school centuires ago. They find out that students back then had a man as a teacher who taught the girls and boys, gave them homework and asked them questions. They had a special building, all the children went to. And they learned the same things, if they were the same age. First Margie does not understand how a person could be a teacher and how the students were thaught the same thing, because her mother says that the education must fit to each child's mind, but nevertheless in her opinion these schools are funny and she wants to read more about it. Then it is time for Margie and Tommy for their school. Margie goes into the schoolroom in her house where the mechanical teacher stands. It is already on, because the lessons are always at regular hours. She was thinking about the old school system and how much fun the children must had, learning and spending time togehter.

Danke!

Grüßle! ~ ♫

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Ich habe eine Written discussion geschrieben. Ist die so gut ich schreibe nämlich morgen eine Klassenarbeit?

Mobile Phones at Schools In the last time there are a lot of discussions about mobile phones on schools. Almost every student has a mobile phone and takes it to the school. So many schools forbid to take mobile phones to the school. There are arguments for and against mobile phones at schools. But now is the question: Does it make sense?

On the one hand there are people who say that mobile phones have to be forbid. First, they say that mobile phones disturb the lessons when they ring. Many people like me have experiences with it and can say that its irritating when it happens and just disturb the lesson. Second, they say that many students use mobile phones to bully other people. They take pictures of them or show people pictures or videos of them. I can agree and saw it once a time how a student took a picture of a girl to bully her. Third, there are a lot of people who say that mobile phones divert the students from learning. A lot of students play games, surf on the internet or take pictures in middle of the school lesson. Once a time I saw it in my class and can agree. That was the side of the supporter of a ban for mobile phones on schools. But then there is the side of the enemys of a ban for mobile phones on schools. First, mobile phones help the students to stay in contact with their parents. In case of emergency at the way to school or home, family problems the parents can arrive their kids by phoning or writing to them. It happened also once a time to me when I had to call the Emergency Service and was important. Second, mobile phones could help the students to get some information from the internet. When they have a break or free-lesson they can go into the internet and search for information.That could help the students to have more fun at school. The third and last argument for mobile phones at schools is that the students could relax in the breaks. They can listen to music, play some games or surf in the internet. It would very much fun for everybody and the students would go full motivationed into their lesson.Many students wish it and so it must be introduced. After looking at both sides, I think that mobile phones shouldnt be banned from take it to the school. There are some better arguments for mobile phones at schools than against. But I think that the schools can make a compromiss with the students and parents. Maybe the students can take their phones to the school but have to give it at the start of the lesson. In the future I think that mobile phones could design the school lessons more interesting and could help.

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Unterschied zwischen "letter to the editor" und "article"?

Was ist der Unterschied zwischen diesen beiden Texttypen?

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Könnte jemand über meinen Essay drüber schauen?

         Every school should demand school uniform

In some countries all over the world school children have to wear uniforms the color scheme and style varies from school to school. In other countries pupils can wear to school what ever clothes they choose. In those countries it could be difficult to introduce school uniforms, because they are not traditionally used to wearing one. In the following essay I want to discuss the advantages to introduce school uniforms world wide.

In my opinion school uniforms ind schools are positive but negative too because not every student have the same style and they cant decide which school uniforms they wanted to wear.

School uniforms are on the one side good because a lot of children are victims of bullying because some of theme haven’t enough money to buy expensive and nice clothes. In this case the school uniform is very practically and maybe a good problem-solving.

On the other side pupils cant find our style and have to wear clothes that they don’t wanted. School uniforms can be nice but not every day ,It quickly becomes boring .However, there are people around the world for which it is too expensive ,always to buy a school uniform. Children grow fast and because of that they have to buy an again and again. We must take into account that the school uniform is maybe expensive but the clothes that the kids need for school is not cheaper and they have to be buy again and again, too.

On the other hand if the pupils wear school uniforms there is not a difference between rich and poor.

I have come to the conclusion that school uniforms are not everywhere positive and children should be able to develop their own style. Cause the bully is not reduced by a school uniform.

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Ist mein If-Satz korrekt + Kommasetzung?

I really want to help you in German but if you haven't got the motivation for learning German, it's maybe the right decision (to stop learning).

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