Ist der Text richtig. Bitte korrigieren. Danke im Vorraus?
Hi Kate, Yesterday was really busy Day. I came home from school at 4 o'clock and had drank a tea. I played computer before My mum had come at home. My mum was happy and she tell me to go shopping. After that we had gone in the cafeteria and we Drink a Coffee. My mum me helped found a great Jeans with the Shop assitant. When I was finished we go had gone home. I want washed My hair and later i had Come and See my dad.
Der ist ist in Simple past und paSt perfect geschrieben.
Hi Kate. yesterday was a really busy day. I came home from school at 4 o'clock and drank some tea. I also played computer games before my parents came home. My mother was happy and told me to go shopping (das sie shoppen geht alleine/mit dir oder du alleine?????). After that we went in the cafeteria and drank a coffe. My mother helped my finding a goodlooking jeans with the help of a shop assitant(great can auch "groß" bedeuten).We went back to home when we were finished. I washed my hair and i went to see my father.
Keine Ahnung ob das jetzt nur Simple past oder Past Perfect ist aber du kannst hoffentlich damit arbeiten. ^^
"helped my to find"
"We went back home"
"great" kann aber auch großartig bedeuten, ist also in dem Fall nicht falsch, sondern erklärt sich eigentlich aus dem Kontext, dass es nicht "groß" bedeutet (was bei einer Jeans nämlich "large" wäre und nicht "great").
Alles erstmal klein, außer die Satzanfänge. o'clock PM. Drink, tell (es müsste told heißen) allowed (erlaubte), we have gone, helped me to find, we weht home, und vorher: when we finished, i washed my hair and i saw my dad
Hi Kate, yesterday was a really busy day.
I came home from school at 4 o'clock pm and drank a tea. I played computer until my mum came home. My mum was happy/was in a good mood and told me to go shopping with her/and proposed to go shopping with her. After that we went to a café where we drank a coffee.
My mum helped me to find a great jeans with the shop assitant (sales girl/sales guy?). Then we went home. I washed my hair and later I went to see my dad/later I met my dad.
"and invited me to go shopping with her" klingt vielleicht noch was netter.
Im Englischen wird alles kleingeschrieben, außer Namen und am Satzanfang.
Das ist so nicht ganz richtig.