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On Wednesday, I was flying to New York with the plane. It  was a perfect day for me because i love new york and ESB. When I arrived i went to a Taxidriver and i said that i would like to see the sights in new york. At first we drove to ESB cause that's my favourite sight in the world. I paid my tour. i rented a bike from a bike station. With my Bike i drove through the central park . I was so happy althoug the wheater wasn´t good.After a long day i was very tired so i searched a hotel.When i was sitting in my room i wrote everything down what i have experienced on that day.

All in all that was a trip that i never fargot.

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