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Dear xyz,

thank you for your letter. Since you described yourself i'd like to write something about myself too. As you may know, my name is abc and i am 16 years old. Even though i was born in (Germany?) my parents are from syria. So I am also half syrian.

I enjoy doing sports. Especially fitness and volleybal. In addition to that I like to spend time with my family and friends. Since i want to improve my English I try to do as many exercise as possible.In the summer holidays we drove to Austria as my Aunt has had her marriage there. After that we drove to Croatia to spend some time together and stayed there for 11 days. It was very nice. The best part of the holidays were the fruits on the trees at the side of the roads. They were soo tasty.

In school I like English class the most. But as I have to improve my English since i am not that good, its hard to follow the lesson. Next to English, my favouritie subjects are Chemistry and Geography.

Best regards

abc


Hier eine etwas bessere Version:

Dear xyz,

thank you for your letter. I enjoyed reading it. Since you described
yourself i'd like to write something about myself too. As you may know, my name is abc and i am 16 years old. Even though i was born in (Germany?) my parents are from syria. So I am half Syrian half German

I enjoy doing sports. Especially fitness and volleybal. In addition to
that I like to spend quality time with my family and friends. As I want to
improve my English I try to do as many exercises as possible. In the
summer holidays we drove to Austria since my Aunt has had her marriage there. After that we drove to Croatia by car to spend some time together and enjoy the sea and the nice weather. We were there for 11 days. It was very nice. The best part of the holidays were the fruits on the trees at the side of the roads. They were all soo tasty.

In school I like English class the most. But as I have to improve my
English since i am not that good, its hard to follow the lesson. Next to
English, my favouritie subjects are Chemistry and Geography.

Best regards

abc


Sind schon einandhalb Jahre her, seit ich im Englisch LK war. Hab also lange Zeit kein Englisch geschrieben oder gesprochen. Aber mein Text sollte "ein paar" Fehler weniger beinhalten ^^.

Viel Glück weiterhin



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Hallo, ich habe am Dienstag meine mündliche Prüfung und wollte mal fragen ob hier jemand vielleicht meinen Text kontrollieren kann?

Today I want tell you something about Holidays. Personally when i get older I don't like travel to other countries because i'm so far away from my friends and i'm afraid to missing out important things. Anyway I travel with my family to different countries, in early life i travel to the Netherlands on a camping ground i can't tell anything about the trip because I can't remember. At the age of 6 i was in Turkey with my hole family, we were in Antalya we stay for 2 weeks. That was a nice time for me and everyone was happy. The hotel was so nice and we had such a great time together. There are so funny memories for example I was afraid of a taxi and we must drive with it to came to the city and it was a party taxi and my mother was sitting next to me and i said "mom you can move closer to me" i said this because i was so afraid. The weather was nice it was very hot and because of this i can't eat so much i dont know why and when we go to the dinner i'm only eating 5 or 6 pieces of melon. That was such a great time. When i was 14 I travel for the second time to turky and we were in the same Hotel, i was with my uncle and my aunt and 2 friends from my uncle. That was a nice time too, but I have noticed that something isn't good, i miss my friends and after four days or so i want back home because they told me on Whatsapp so great things what they did and that sounds so funny. But all in all it was a great trip to turkey. At the age of 15 my mom asks me whether I want to go to Italy with her and her partner. And i must be honest I have advised 2 weeks and asks my friends would you travel to italy if you were me and they said Joyce why you are thinking about that? Yes of course i would travel.. At the end my desicion was yes and i must say that i had a great time in Italy.. We drive with a bike trough the city, we took part in a guided tour of the city Sienna. And we saw many sights for example the leaning tower of pisa. In the easter Holidays i will travel to the north sea with my family and my best friend Joan. And i'm very glad because Joan is with us. And in the Summer Holidays i will travel to turkey with my mother and her partner, i hope we have a great time and i wont miss my friends so hardly. For me the best holidays were the summer holidays because you mustn't think on school and the wheather is actually nice. And when i dont travel to other countries i'm only on the way with my friends. We go swimming, or make a picnic sometimes we camping in the garden. All in all i can say that i love holidays.

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