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USA means united states of america the consist of fifty staates with hawaii and alaska there live over 300 mio people an a area of aprox 9 point 8 mio square kilometers The capital of usa is washington d.c. its a own district the distric of columbia 1/3 of the people who work work for the federal government The centre of washington is the capitol
The poltical situation
The Usa are a federal republic with a president The constiution exists since 1789 The president is the gead of the state and the head of the gouverment. In the Usa are two impormant parties the democatic party and the republican party
DONALD JOHN TRUMP he was born on june 14 1946 he is an American bussinesmann He is the 45th and current president of the United states Trump was the chairmann and president of his organzition he became the president elect on november 9th 2016 after a close race with former secreaty of state Hillary clinton Much of his money was made in real estate in New york city. Las vegas and atlantic city He used to own the miss Universe pageant. He was star in his own realitty show.
New york city
The biggest city in the usa is New york city in the state of New York. New York city had 8 mio inhabitants. In the Consolidated Metropolitan Statistical Area, in that New York city belongs, even 18 million people. New yorkis divided in five districts: Queens, Brooklyn, Richmond, bronx und mannhatten
Los angels is because its nice climate the Centre of the film- and Tv industry. The population of Los angeles is increasing steadily because of many immigrants from Latin america and Asia. In the moment the popultation is 3.7 million people. The area around even 13.2 million.
Chicago in the state of llions is the third biggest city in the Usa. Chicago has the second biggest airport in Usa and the whole world. 2.9 million people live in Chicago. In the area around nearly 7 million. In chicago are many ethinc groups: 20% of the Population are Blacks and 10% came from latin America. But there are also many people with German descent. Chicago is a big Traffic and industry centre in the Usa. One reason is the big harbour.
Virginia is in the north-east of the USA, on the Atlantic ocean. Virignia has its borders in the north with west virginia, Maryland and washington D.C.; in the east with Maryland and the Atlantic Ocean ; in the south with North Carolina and Tennessee and in the west with Kentucky. Virginia came on the 25th June 1788 as the 13 state to the Usa. One of the first English settlements in North America was 1607 in Jamestown. In the following time Virginia became one of the leading colonies.
Alaska is the biggest state in USA but it has only 644 000 inhabitants. Alaska is since 1959 a state of The USA. The most important cities are the Capitol Juneau. Anchorage. Fairbanks. Sitka und ketchikan. In Alaska is the mount McKinley, the highest mount
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The USA (The United States of America) consists of 50 states. PUNKT. Including Hawaii and Alaska its population is about 300 million on an area of about 9.8 m (million) square kilometers.
The capital of the USA ist Washington DC, "DC" standing for "District of Columbia", a special district which does not belong to any US state.
The Constitution has existed since...
Alaska has been a US state since 1959. .. the capital Juneau..
In Alaska you find the highest mountain of the USA , Mount Mc Kinley, now usually and officially called Denali).
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The national Sports of the USA is American Football(NFL), Baseball(MLB), Basketball(NBA) and Hockey(NHL). The national teams of the United States in These Sports are reagular contenders for a title win. The most visited event in this sport is the Super Bowl it is the final of the National Football Leauge.It takes place Usually on The first Sunday in February.The Super bowl is one of the World's largest single-sport events and in the Usa they achieved every year the Highest television ratings ever. The game was broadcast live by NBC. A 30 seconds Commercial cost 3 million U.S. dollars. The NBC took more than 200 million. The winner of this year was pittsburgh Steelers they won 27:23 vs. Arizona Cardinals.
The national parks of America are the endless treasures of the Nature, because everyone of them is unique. The national park's history Amrica's history. The first national park on earth was the yellowstone national park, which was founded in 1872 and in the meantime is the biggest Parksystem in the world. Even in majestic country as American they cause Wondrousness again and again with their beauty and variety. Meanwhile vistitors come from all countries in the world.The national parks aren't considered museums, but as recreation for the body and the soul.
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los angels is because its nice climate the Centre of the film- and Tv industry.
Los Angeles is the centre of the film and tv industry because of the nice weather/climate . So wäre der Satz richtig