Ist das vom englisch her richtig?
Kurt Donald Cobain was born on February 20 1967, in Aberdeen, Washington. he had a happy childhood until his parents divorced. The divorce left Kurt's outlook on the world forever scarred. He became withdrawn and anti-social. He was constantly placed with one relative to the next Two weeks prior to graduation, he dropped out of Aberdeen High School upon realizing he did not have enough credits to graduate. His mother gave him a choice: find employment or leave. After one week, Cobain found his clothes and other belongings packed away in boxes. Feeling banished from his own mother's home, Cobain stayed with friends and during periods of homelessness he lived under a bridge over the Wishkah River,in 1986 he formed the band Nirvana with Kirst Novselic .. In 1989 Nirvana recorded their debut album Bleach under the independent label Sub-Pop records. Their first song played at a radio station was Floyd the barber.. Their next album Nevermind with became a 90s masterpiece and made Kurt's Nirvana one of the most successful bands in the world.The Song smells like teen spitit became a anthem for a whole generation. Kurt became trampled upon with success and found the new lifestyle hard to bear.so he became addicted to heroin In February 1992 Kurt married Courtney Love the leadsinger of the band hole, she was already pregnant with his child, Frances Bean Cobain. Nirvana released their next album Incesticide later that year. The album appealed to many fans due to the liner notes, which expressed Kurt's open-mindedness. In September 1993 Nirvana released their next album, 'In Utero', which topped the charts. On March 4, 1994, Kurt was taken to hospital in a coma because of an overdose rohypnol (roofies) in conjuction with alcohol.. It was officially stated as an accident but many believe it to have been an unsuccessful suicide attempt. Family and friends convinced Kurt to seek rehab. Kurt was said to have fled rehab after only a few days from a missing person's report filed by Courtney Love. On April 8th Kurt's body was found in his Seattle home. In his arms was a shotgun, which had been fired into his head. Near him laid a suicide note. It was addressed to his wife Courtney Love and his daughter Frances Bean Cobain. Was it suicide? In rom, while the roofies incident, kurt says to the physicians in the hospital that he can remember anything about taking pills or drinking alcohol. And he denied that this was an unsuccessful suicide. But everybody knows that his wife courney love was taken rohypnol, because once she takes them in an interview and their house in seattle was full of empty rohypnol packaging. The main problem why he cannot kill himself is that his heroin level in his blood was so high it had to killed him imminently so he could not pull the trigger not to mention recline syringe in a cigar box take the patrons in the shotgun. So many says that courney love commissioned somebody to kill him. kurt was thinking about a divorce, his jurist
Wie oben bereits gesagt, Englischlehrer sind nicht doof und können googeln, hier eine deiner Quellen: http://www.imdb.com/list/r8gxZDP5M8U/
Bei mir wäre das eine glatte 6, wegen Plagiats (= Intellektueller Diebstahl), siehe auch: Gutenberg/ Schawan etc...
Selber geschrieben oder selber gepastet? Bei mir (Englischlehrerin) würden aufgrund des wechselnden Stils und des sehr "sophisticated" Vokabulars alle Alarmglocken läuten.
hier mit allen enthaltenen Fehlern abgekupfert:
Bis auf einige kleinere Rechtschreibfehler passt das im Großen und Ganzen