Ist das richtig ins Englisch übersetzt?
Samstag ist der einzige Tag,an dem ein Schüler oder Schülerin ausschlafen und lange wach bleiben kann.
Ungeschützter Sex brigt viele Gefahren,von denen AIDS nicht die geringste ist.
Nicht jeder ist mit 16 schon in der Lage,mit einer Beziehung klarzukommen.
Der Versuch,sich von den Eltern frei zu machen,kann einem Angst einjagen.
So schwierig es auch ist,die meisten Heranwachsenden kommen damit gut zurrecht.
Saturday is the only day on which a schoolboy or schoolgirl can get a good night's sleep and remain long awake.
Unprotected sex brigt many dangers from which AIDS is not the slightest one.
Not everybody is already able with 16 to manage a respect.
The attempt to free itself from the parents can give to fear.
So difficultly it is also, most adolescents well manage with it.
Mir ist aufgefallen, dass du Scoolboy und Schoolgirl gesagt hast. Soweit ich weiß, bezeichnet man SchülerInnen allgemein hin als "students"
The only day a student can sleep long and stay awake until midnight and later is Saturday.
Unprocteted Sex is very dangerous. One of the most dangerous illnesses you can get is AIDS.
Not everybody is able to manage a relationship in the age of 16 years.
They could fear the attempt to get away from their parents.
But even so most of the youngsters get along with it.
Ich hoffe sehr, das es hilft
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Warum stellst du deine Übersetzung hier nicht zur Korrektur ein - nach dem Motto Learning by doing!
Ich empfehle für das Vokabular ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com,
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- Saturday is the only day on which a schoolboy or schoolgirl can get a good night's sleep and remain long awake. ----- Saturday is the only day on which a schoolboy/girl can sleep in an stay awake longer.
- Unprotected sex brigt many dangers from which AIDS is not the slightest one. - from which AIDS is not even the worst.
- At the age of 16, not everyone is able to handle a relationship
- The attempt to free oneselfs from their parents can be terrifying.
- As hard as it can be, most teenagers handle it well.
Written Discussion "Would you like to live in Mumbai". Könnte mir jmand die Discussion verbessern?
Könntet ihr den Text verbessern ?. Ich shreib morgen ne Arbeit und ich find den nicht so gut und würde mich auf ein Feedback freuen.
**Today I am writing about the question „would you like to live in Mumbai?”. I think it´s a good question, because there a many Arguments for and against.
My first Argument for living in Mumbai is, that if you speak English, you can manage everything in the city. It is not necessary to speak the regional language. For example, …. Second argument is that India is one of few countries, where even people can have a maid or a chauffeur. You are able to afford them. In addition you can send your child to school. Because there are German, American and English schools. Another Argument for is that Mumbai is a city for shopaholics. There are designer closets much cheaper than in Germany. The qualities from the Materials are good. Tough the crime rate is high, so you can robbed in the city. The city has good transport options, for instance local trains, metro, monorail and public transport buses. No other city can sustain this much population and traffic. Nevertheless is there the rush hour. The Streets are crowded and it tooks a long time to come to the destination. My last argument is that the food in Mumbai is very delicious. You can eat in small restaurants, on the street or in very good restaurants to try out different cuisines. However you have to pay attention with food.
To sum up, the people in the city are very friendly and they will help you every time, when you need. I think I would like to live in Mumbai It´s a fascinating city with colorful festivals. **
Hallo könnte wer mein englisch Referat kontrollieren?
What is factory farming ?. Factory Farming is a way of producing meat and other animal products quickly and cheaply. The animals are kept in small cages. They get special food, so they are growing faster. The main products of this industry are meat, milk and eggs for human consumption. Advantages: Cheaper prices With the use of factory farms, the prices of food became very cheap. The main reason for this is that the food can be processed very fast. Also, the food for the animals is very cheap, because they buy it in mass orders. Enough animal products for the market Factory farms use vitamins, minerals, and other substances that make animals grow faster and so they can produce much more food. Big farms also have modern tools which helps to produce meat, milk, eggs and other products very quickly and in an efficient way.
Disadvantages: Very bad living conditions In many factory farms the animals are kept in small cages, where they don’t have any space to walk around and do what they naturally do. The animals are usually kept indoor, so they don’t get any fresh air or sun. The cages are not cleaned as often as it is necessary, so the living conditions for the animals are very bad.
Bad for people’s health Factory farms are bad for people’s health in two ways. One of these is the pollution what they produce, which harm the health of the people who are living next to them. The other way is through the antibiotics that they give their animals to make them immune against illnesses. These can be transmitted to people from the meat and other animal products.
Small farming businesses haven’t a chance against factory farms Many factory farms are owned by corporations, who have the possibility to buy modern tools, equipment and larger spaces for the animals. They’re able to sell their products at a lower price. Smaller farms usually don’t have the resources to buy faster and bigger machines and therefore they can’t compete with their larger rivals.
Berichtigung meiner Erörterung
Hallo!Ich war lange krank und schreibe bald eine Erörterung im Englischen. Deshalb bitte ich jemanden um diese zu berichtigen.
On the Website 'schoolrating.com' can people assess their school. These results are public. The Website is a idea but it could come true. But is the webpage 'schoolrating.com' so good or are there some things which weren't observe?
The main idea is that parents or newcomer in the city can get information about the school.This makes the finding for the right school easier.The school can also react to the critic from the students.
On the ohter side there are some aspects which millitate against 'schoolrating.com'. In the GTC stands that all people can rate the school without any registration.So a hater from the school can rate this school really bad so that less new students come to the school.A student, who hates a teacher, can hold out oneself as a student several times with fake names to rate this teacher so down that he can get problems and maybe get fired.
First I thought the Idea is great.But in the GTC are many things which have to be reworked.Maybe like a censorship of teachers name and a thoughtful registration.The parents or newcomer can get also information from the school.As I see it, the website 'schoolrating.com' is senseless.
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