Schreibe am Donnerstag meine Englisch zap jnd würde gerne wissen ob das eine gute Erörterung ist. Bitte bewertet es inhaltlich und sprachlich. Und was ist verbessern könnte. Ist echt wichtig. Wäre euch echt dankbar Thema : Rauchverbot ja oder nein
Nowadays many people think that smoking should be forbidden. Is that right ? There are many reasons for and against.
The first point is that it is like toxic for people when they smoke. Moreover a lot of guys smoke outside where many other people are. It could be that they smoke passive and it is quite worser than smokes active. But then we can forbid it only on places where are many people.
The reason is that if we banned smoking all companys become poor and million lose their jobs.
But the mainly point is that the state earn fewer money, because they get less tax and they need money for different causes. That is why they must raise the land tax. At worst ih can be that the economic system crash.
After looking both sides I must say that it could be very dangerous to banned smoking. The only thing that we could do is not to allowed it when children are near the smoker to safe them.