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Aufgabe: How can girls/women cope with the many different expectations placed on them? Write a comment.
It seems to me that there are many different expectations placed on women/girls. They have to be good wives and mothers at home, exemplary pupils at school, they have to be beautiful in the media, and they also have to be charming at work instead of being bossy. From my point of view, most people are expecting women to be perfect human beings, and I am certain that it is impossible for women to satisfy all the expectations that are placed on them. On one hand, I am convinced that expectations can motivate women and drive them to try harder. Expectations can also make women be more ambitious because they have the feeling that they are needed from the society. On the other hand, too many different expectations might burn them out and make them feel stressed out. In the worst case, they might suffer from mental disorders, for example depression. That is the reason why I think it is important for women to know how to cope with them. First of all, I think they must try to be themselves, and, furthermore, they should learn to love themselves, be proud of what they archive in life and be satisfied with their very own accomplishments. They shouldn’t be controlled by other people’s judgements or criticism but live a life without regrets. Second of all, I think women should set their own life goals. The advantages of having life goals are to give them clarity on their ambitions and be the best they can be. It will help them understand which expectations are realistic, which are not and realize what they should focus on in life. Besides, women shouldn’t be ashamed to talk about their limits. Everyone is unique and special in different ways. Each person born into this world has been granted with special skills, talents or abilities. They might not be as beautiful or smart as their friends and co-workers, but they definitely have something more charming, special; which their friends and co-workers don’t have. To summarize, one can say that expectations have both advantages and disadvantages. I believe the most important thing is to know how to deal with them and turn them from something negative into something positive.