Ich brauche eine Korrektur meines Englischreferats!?

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"The Great Dictator" is a satirical and political drama and the first sound film from (Präposition) Charlie Chaplin. The movie deals with Adolf Hitler and Nazi Germany. It was released in 1940, so no one knew at this (Wort) time (Position) about the real horror of the conzentration (RS) camps. Later Chaplin said (kein Komma) that he could not have made the film if he had known about the truth. The film was Charlie Chaplins (Grammar) idea of a satirical attack on fascism. The film is about Adenoid Hynkle (= Adolf Hitler) a ruthless dictator, who wants to rule the world. I would like to show you "the globe scene" so you can imagine (Wort) the role (...) The other main character is a Jewish barner (Wort), which (Pronomen) you will see later in another clip. The two characters looks (Grammar) like twins (kein Komma) because both were played by Charlie Chaplin. During the story (Komma) the Jewish (Präposition) can escape from the ghetto (Komma) in which he was trapped in a stolen uniform. Hynkle had been mistaken for the barber, while he was hunting in civil clothes. (Zeit) Everyone thought that the barber is (Zeit) the true dictator. He used this chance and gave a speech in which he called for peace and brotherhood. I would like to show you an extract of (Präposition) the speech

Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.

Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com,

für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de.

:-) AstridDerPu

PS:

Die wichtigste Zeitform in einer film review ist das Present Simple.

siehe:

- jochenenglish.de/?p=7161

- ego4u.de/de/cram-up/writing/review

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