Hallo. Ich würde gerne wissen wie ich den untenstehenden englischen Text besser gestalten kann weil er doch sehr deutsch klingt. Zudem wäre ich dankbar wenn mal wer über die Grammatik drüberschauen könnte (ich hoffe es sind nicht zu viele Fehler drin :) ) Der Text behandelt die Frage "money doesn't make you happy- do you agree with this statement?"
I don't have any opinion on this matter, because you can't generalize it for people all over the world. It depends on how you live and how your social circumstances are. Here in Europe, especially in Germany, we have a lot of money and we take things which make us happy for granted-for example having enough food, running water or a roof above our heads. In my opinion, it's just ridiculous how some people say that they have too little money. This statement makes me angry, we just want luxury goods such as chocolate or parties to boost our happiness which already exists. The people in poorer countries need money to be happy, because they don't have enough to live, to be more accurate, to be at least a little happier in contrast to the people in wealthy countries. The lest people have they money which is essential for the prerequisite to happiness- the things we are used to. We should learn to be grateful every day for the fact that we live in a part of the world where hunger, diseases and poverty aren't bigger problems.(Die folgende Passage klingt auffällig deutsch, wäre an dieser Stelle für Verbesserung besonders dankbar) I need to admit sometimes I think to myself: "oh no, my happiness has left me, I need this and that!" But becoming used to our luxurys is human nature. I can summarize that the people in the wealthy countries should be aware of our daily happiness and we don't need more money to be happy. In contrast, the people in the poorer parts of the world need money to be a little happier under the given conditions.
Dankeschön für eure Hilfe. :)