Hilfe beim korrekturlesen einer englischen charakterisierung?
Hey Wie oben schon genannt bräuchte ich Hilfe beim Korrrekturlesen einer Charakterisierung der Queen
The text “A Woman´s Work is never done“, written by J.F.O. McAllister is about the Queen and her attitudes to her job. In the following I will characterize her. According to her age of 89 years, the queen looks like an old lady with her short white hair and her glasses. But despite her age, she looks really elegant no matter if she wears her royal outfit with the fur, the gloves, the necklace and the crone, or if she just wears a normal dress. As queen of England she´s got powers as well as duties. Her most important powers are to dissolve parliament (ll. 8), to open parliament (l. 15), but there are also duties she has to fulfill like making visits abroad (l.15), to host guests and to sign bills (ll. 16). The queen is an animal loving person. Her favorite animals are dogs and horses. She also loves to watch horseraces (ll.56). As Pamela Hicks, a friend of her say´s, the job as queen is really suitable for her even if it´s a duty for her and she doesn´t see a special happiness in it (ll. 64) and being a humorous person helps her not to get bored in her job. One reason for doing so much charity work might be that she´s a really religious woman (l. 91). The queen is an active person that does a lot of sports to have enough energy for doing her hard work (ll. 76). Because of being a remote person (l. 46) she never gives any interview. However she´s loved of the people because she always takes care of her subjects (l. 46)
Vielen dank im Vorraus für eure Hilfe