Heyyy :) ich musste in Englisch eine Erörterung schreiben und wollte fragen ob irgendjemand noch Fehler in meinem Text findet?

Lots of people say that break up with friends by SMS is very impersonal. Other people think that it is okay to break up like this. So the question is: Should I break up with my friends by sending a text message or not? First, it is shorter and faster to write a SMS instead of meeting your friends. For example if you do not want to tell your friend personally that you want to break up with him/her you can send him or her a text message which is much easier and faster. Also you do not see any emotions, so it is not face to face. Second is that you have more time to think about what you write or what you say to the person. That means that you do not have to explain yourself so you do not have to tell your friends the real reasons why you end the friendship. Besides, you can avoid a big fight or example if you friend is very angry. On the other hand it is very impersonal and disrespectful. If you only send your friend a SMS you can not discuss it and express yourself. Another point is that it is very cowardly and possibly painful for the other person. So in my opinion is it not fair to break up with friends by send them a text message because it is very disrespectful and impersonal.

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WisdomOwl

09.09.2017, 21:33

Erst einmal muss ich sagen, dass ich kein Experte bin, aber ich würde es folgendermaßen schreiben:

Lots of people say that breaking up ....

Ich finde, dass manche Teile des Textes etwas verdeutscht klingen (vom Satzbau her), diese sind dadurch aber nicht falsch.

Anstatt zu schreiben: First,... würde ich eher schreiben: One of the reasons to do so is...

Anstatt immer he /she oder him/her zu schreiben kannst du einfach they/them benutzen. Klingt im Deutschen falsch, ist im Englischen aber korrekt.

Im letzten Satz: it is not fair to break up with friends by sending them....

Bswss

Von gutefrage auf Grund seines Wissens auf einem Fachgebiet ausgezeichneter Nutzer

Englisch

09.09.2017, 23:05

..hat breaking up with friends by text message...

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you do not have to talk to this Person anymore

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In Addition, it is very quiet and peaceful out there ,but also the rest is pleasant and the stress that you have in a city, falls away.

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hallo :) ich habe eine Erörterung zum Thema Schuluniformen für den englisch unterricht geschrieben, wäre cool wenn ihr mir Tipps zur Grammatik und vielleicht auch Ergänzungen sagen könntet. hier ist sie:

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Hi thalina,

I want to talk with you about the reasons why you get F in your last exam. Be don't worry it just happened. The problem is not with you, it just because you are often distracted. But that is easy to solve. Now I'm going to give you some advice how to be most of the time concentrated.

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if you follow that tips, I'm sure you will pass your next exam.

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Wäre lieb, wenn jmnd. drüberschauen könnte und evtl. Fehler findet, Verbesserungsvorschläge...

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Was könnte ich in dem Aufsatz ,,My dream job" noch schreiben?

Hallo leute, ich habe einen Aufsatz auf englisch geschrieben der über mein Traumberuf handelt. Ich muss 15 Sätze haben aber ich habe nur 11 Sätze. Kann mir jemand helfen noch 4 Sätze dazu zuschreiben? Ich bin übrigens 14 und habe sicher irgendwo fehler in dem Text!

My dream job:

I'd like to become a primary school teacher. There are postitive and negative aspects in the job. The job is well paid and you have breaks during the lessons. The good thing about the job is that it is not dangerous at work. One thing else is that you have long summer holidays. You don't work on the weekend and you have fixed working hours, however, the job has also negative aspects. The bad thing about this job is that you have stress and that you have to have patient. In the class are sometimes disrespectful pupils and they don't listent to you. That's why it may be that there is noise in the class. At home you have to control the homework of the pupils and have stress because you have to work quickly. A big problem for me is to get up early. But if you want to become that job, you will get used to it.

Ich weiß da sind Fehler drinnen aber ich bin kein Profi! Kann mir also bitte jemand helfen noch 4 Sätze zu schreiben?

Danke an die Leute die das durchgelesen haben und mir antworten :)

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Könnte jemand über meinen Essay drüber schauen?

         Every school should demand school uniform

In some countries all over the world school children have to wear uniforms the color scheme and style varies from school to school. In other countries pupils can wear to school what ever clothes they choose. In those countries it could be difficult to introduce school uniforms, because they are not traditionally used to wearing one. In the following essay I want to discuss the advantages to introduce school uniforms world wide.

In my opinion school uniforms ind schools are positive but negative too because not every student have the same style and they cant decide which school uniforms they wanted to wear.

School uniforms are on the one side good because a lot of children are victims of bullying because some of theme haven’t enough money to buy expensive and nice clothes. In this case the school uniform is very practically and maybe a good problem-solving.

On the other side pupils cant find our style and have to wear clothes that they don’t wanted. School uniforms can be nice but not every day ,It quickly becomes boring .However, there are people around the world for which it is too expensive ,always to buy a school uniform. Children grow fast and because of that they have to buy an again and again. We must take into account that the school uniform is maybe expensive but the clothes that the kids need for school is not cheaper and they have to be buy again and again, too.

On the other hand if the pupils wear school uniforms there is not a difference between rich and poor.

I have come to the conclusion that school uniforms are not everywhere positive and children should be able to develop their own style. Cause the bully is not reduced by a school uniform.

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Hallo,

ich sollte einige Vor und Nachteile eines Video Chats auflisten auf Englisch:

you can see the person directly
you speak, hear and see in one, so 3 in 1
you can show a new dress that is new directly and therefore doesn't have to send a picture
actually it is a face to face communication too

habt ihr noch welche?

if you re mad at a person and you don't want her to know that

If you sent a message to the wrong person, you can delete it, and you can not do it through a video chat

habt ihr noch welche

Danke

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