Hallo! wäre nett wenn Ihr meinen Text durchlesen würdet und mir sagen könntet, was ich daran noch besser machen kann. Es handelt sich um ein Motivationsschreiben für ein Erasmus Semester an einer englischen Universität. Das ist ziemlich wichtig für mich und ich möchte ein möglichst gutes Motivationsschreiben abgeben. Danke im Voraus!
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to introduce myself as proper candidate for an Erasmus+ semester abroad (spring term and summer term) at [name of university]. My name is [name] and I am currently studying architecture in my X semester at [name of university] in [country].
As I have always planned to spend a semester abroad I am very happy to use the opportunities given to us by the Erasmus+ programme. I chose [name of university] because I am particularly interested in spending a semester (or two terms) at an English-speaking university. I think this is a unique opportunity to combine my studies with first-hand experience of life in an English-speaking country. As a prospective architect it is very important to work on an international level. Alongside improving my spoken and written English especially in this area, I also hope to gain insight in British culture and history and how architectural issues are seen in this context.
Before I decided to study architecture I passed my A-level at [name of secondary school] with superior success. This included reaching CEFR level B2/C1 in English. Since I attended Tourism School I have always been interested in foreign cultures. I am an open-minded person who likes to make friends with people from all over the world. This is also one of the reasons why I chose [name of university]. Among all partner universities of [home univeristy], [name of university] offers the largest international community. I also look forward to learning from professionals with industry experience as well as working and studying in lively and creative environment at the Faculty of Arts.
Finally, I believe an [name of university] is the excellent place for my Erasmus+ semester. The experience I can get studying in a foreign country would be valuable for both my studies and personal development. So, I am ready and willing to take on new challenges.
Thank you for your attention.