Hallo liebe gemeinde :)
Ich bin grad bei den online application forms und musste einen brief an meine gastfamilie schreiben (die ich nicht kenne und hab auch noch keine), ich sollte um die 300 Wörter schreiben..gut ich hab jetzt 450 aber mein gott ;)
Aufjedenfall wollt ich euch bitten, dass jemand mal drüber guckt wegen grammatik und so und dann noch wie er inhaltlich passt oder ob ich was ändern sollte :)
first of all I want to thank you for reading my letter in which I want to introduce myself and tell you something about my family, friends, hobbies and my expectations for the coming year.
My name is xy (but everyone calls me Anni), I am 16 years old and I live near Frankfurt which is a big city in the middle of Germany. I have one brother. His name is Malte and he is 23 years old. My parents doesn't live together and I stay most times at my mothers flat, but I have good realitionship to both. The realitionship to my brother is really good and we can talk about everything. He live really far away from me, but we try to see us as much as possible.
I have a cat too, he is called Perseus and is 19 years old. I really love him, because he is just amazing. I love to be with animals and I have pets since I am little.
I love to spend my freetime with my friends, listen to music , write storys, play tennis, read and work with horses. When I am with my friends we mostly talk, laugh and have fun. I don't know what I would do without my friends, because they always help me to smile in every situation. My best friends Gloria and Vero are always reliable and with them I can talk a couple of hours without noticing that I run out of time. You see my friends and my family are the most important things in my life.
My friends describe me as an open, spontaneous, humorus, helpful and companionable person.
I just want me and my envirmont to be happy all the time. So I am sure we will finds solutions together for our problems. Of course will also help you with the housework for example wash the dishes, set the table, cook the meal and so on. I also do this things here in Germany. It would be great if I could cook a typical german meal or my favorite food for you.
I am really exited to experience the American way of life. I heard so much of it and soon I will be able to live it with you together.
I would apreciate it so much if you would let me be a part of your family. I know it is not an easy thing to let somebody completly strange into your house, but I think we will have a wonderful time together and learn alot from each other.
Well, I hope you could get an impression of me and my life.
I am so exited to meet you.