hallo, und zwar ich muss dieses bild interpretieren und analysieren meine frage ist ob ich es korrekt geschrieben habe und AIDA Krit. in meinem Text vorhanden?
In this advertisement the cleaning agent Ajax is presented. Ajax is one of the largest detergent manufacturers in the world. The picture shows a child and a man. This picture was taken in seashore in a room. Further, the picture has been photographed very professionally. The child in the advertising holds a fishing rod with a smile. The child stands next to a man holding a fish. Most likely, that man is the child´s father. He has a laughing face as well. What has alerted me is that the two persons in the picture are reflected on the floor. This shows that the brand Ajax makes the floor very clean. I was especially interested in the pictures on the wall and the little table. However, a few blue shoes are next to the basketball. There is also a vase of flowers that stands on the table. In my opinion, this advertisement is very good because the floor looks really clean AJAX. The cleaning agent Ajax is highlighted with red font, so you can see the company brand right away. I would like to recommend this ad because this ad can easily affect people. In my opinion something is missing in this ad for example a women, because this advertisment is more for women. Thes products are usually for women. Even at my home only my mother buys cleaning supplies, because my father doesn´t know. I think that this advertising will be successful because this advertising can influence the people. Otherwise this advertisement is good.
This picture advertises the cleaning agent "Ajax".......In the picture one can see a small child and a man, who presumably is the father. This picture, which was taken very professionally, shows a room, where from the French windows (die Verandatür) one can see the beach. In the advertisement the child is smiling and holding a fishing rod and the man who is standing next to the boy is holding a fish and is also smiling. What drew my attention in this picture was that both the man and the boy were reflected in the mirror-like floor of this room. This shows the extent to which "Ajax" is able to clean floors. Of special interest to me were the were the pictures on the wall and the little table............this ad can easily influence people..............something is missing from this ad and to be more precise - women! After all, this advert is aimed at women......
Ich weiß nicht, ob ich das richtig mache, da ich einige Sätze ein bißchen verändert habe. Was meinst du?
Ein paar Anmerkungen:
- Der Reflektierte Fisch ist deutlich größer als das Original. Da hat ich ggf wer was mit gedacht.
- Der Reiniger ist nicht mit roter Schrift hervorgehoben da das wohl das normale aussehen des Reinigers ist. Er steht aber prominent im Vordergrund und nirgend wo sonnst sticht rot ins Auge.
- Warun sollte eine Frau in der werbung andere Frauen ansprechen? Warum sollten Männer nicht angesprochen werden dürfen. Auch Männer putzen. Und könnte hier nicht die assoziation sein das die wohnung auch sauber bleibt selbst wenn Frau nicht jeden moment mit dem wischer hinter den Herren hinterher rennt?
- Was genau sagen uns die Ausflugskleidung und das Sportzubehör? Liegt da ggf die Assoziation nahe das Ajax selbst bei einem aktiven Vater Sohn duo den Boden sauber hält?
Wenn schon, dann cleansing agent oder einfach: detergent.
Ajax ist kein Hersteller (manufacturer) , sondern nur eine Marke des COLGATE-Palmolive Konzerns.
Eine Werbeanzeige ist nicht "an advertising", sondern an advert / an advertisement, oder kurz "an ad".
Also: Nicht * "This advertising will be successful", sondern: This advert /advertisement/ ad will be...
for example a woman ...
the two people (nicht "persons")
Ist der Text (Englisch) so korrekt?
Hallo, ich mache bald ein Auslandsjahr und musste für die Bewerbung 6 Fotos hinzufügen und diese kurz beschreiben, könnte bitte jemand diese Texte korrektur lesen? Ich möchte wirklich keine Fehler drin haben, da dies die Gastfamile bekommt. Bitte wundert euch nicht, es sind natürlich auch Namen im Text, diese werde ich hier aber entfernen!
That is me with my Dad. I was with my family this winter over New Year`s Eve in Austria. It was my first ski holiday with my family, before I was two times with my school on a trip to Austria, there I lerned to drive Ski. We had a lot of fun.
That is a pic from my sister and me. It was taken at my confirmation in spring 2016. It was a really great day, that I spend with my family.
In this picture you see my little cousin (name). He was born at the (geburtstag) 2017. I spend a lot of time with him, so I often baby-sitting him. I am also the godaunt of him, and I´m so lucky about that.
That is my family. On the right you see my Dad (name). At his left side you see my sister name, she is 18 years old. At the left side you see my mother name and me. This picture was taken in Mallorca, 2016. Our holiday was great, and we saw a lot of amazing places.
That is a cake that I baked for Christmas 2017. I really often bake for some family celebration, I started it 2014. The biggest cake was the weddingcake for my aunt and my uncle. It was really tricky to bake that, but my mum and my grandma helped me.
That is my dog Tinka, we have her since 2012, now she is circa 7 years old. I also have eight chicken and some fishs in our garden. I also had some rabbits, guinea pigsand mouses.
Englisch Personenbeschreibung Korrektur lesen bitte Hilfe?
Bitte helft mir ich habe niemanden der mir den Text korrigieren kann :/ und morgen schreibe ich eine Arbeit ... also: This is a movie poster of Romeo and Juliet. That movie poster was drawn. The illustration shows Romeo and Juliet and they kiss. In this illustration you can see that they are in love and really happily. The painting is special of the love behimd this picture. The picture reminds me on teenagers who have freshly fallen in love and it is a very realistic picture because one can identify with the persons. In the background and also at the top is like a yellow bright ball surrounded by a red orange colour. In the yellow ball is a burning red heart with roses from inside and a red flame at the top ot the heart. The heart in the yellow is surrounded at the left and right side of black white furious men with guns in their hands turned on the heart in the middle.
Kann jemand diesen Italienisch Text verbessern?
(Falls möglich bitte fettgedruckte Schrift bei den Fehlern verwenden, dankeschön c:) Bei chiedere / piacere konnte ich die 3./4. Fall Abwandlungen nicht auswendig.
Ciao Rachele, Che cosa stai facendo?
Vorrei chiedesti (/chiederesti?) per i tuoi tempi liberi! Quale hai? E che cosa è lo tuo sport beniamino?
A me piace giocare a ping pong. Lo, giociamo sepesso a scuola. Ma gioco a calcio anche. Purtroppo, non c'è una possibilità per giocare lo. Dai miei tempi liberi, piaccio più disegnare e giocare la chitarra. Gioco la dalle due anni. Preferisco la musica Rap e Rock. Non ascolto elettro. Al'inverno, mi piace sciare con la mia famiglia.
E tu? Che cosa piacesti (/piaceresti)?
Was könnte ich in dem Aufsatz ,,My dream job" noch schreiben?
Hallo leute, ich habe einen Aufsatz auf englisch geschrieben der über mein Traumberuf handelt. Ich muss 15 Sätze haben aber ich habe nur 11 Sätze. Kann mir jemand helfen noch 4 Sätze dazu zuschreiben? Ich bin übrigens 14 und habe sicher irgendwo fehler in dem Text!
My dream job:
I'd like to become a primary school teacher. There are postitive and negative aspects in the job. The job is well paid and you have breaks during the lessons. The good thing about the job is that it is not dangerous at work. One thing else is that you have long summer holidays. You don't work on the weekend and you have fixed working hours, however, the job has also negative aspects. The bad thing about this job is that you have stress and that you have to have patient. In the class are sometimes disrespectful pupils and they don't listent to you. That's why it may be that there is noise in the class. At home you have to control the homework of the pupils and have stress because you have to work quickly. A big problem for me is to get up early. But if you want to become that job, you will get used to it.
Ich weiß da sind Fehler drinnen aber ich bin kein Profi! Kann mir also bitte jemand helfen noch 4 Sätze zu schreiben?
Danke an die Leute die das durchgelesen haben und mir antworten :)
Englisch What I would save in a fire?
Hallo :) Ich habe einen Artikel über das obenstehende Thema schreiben müssen. So hab ich mich hingesetzt und einen geschrieben. Jedoch bin ich nicht sehr zufrieden mit meiner Wortwahl und Satzstellung. Hat jemand Verbesserungsvorschläge? Danke im Voraus!
What I would save in a fire?
Have you ever thought about which possession you would choose to save if your house was on fire? Well, for me it would definitely be my cat Baloo. He is my everything. The imagination, the he would be in a fire is frightening. Last Saturday I’ve lost my other cat called Simba, because of a car accident. Now I’m really down and I can’t imagine what I would do without Baloo. For many people would that be irreproducible, because it’s just a cat. However, for me is this not true. I think it’s a creature, witch has the law to live. Have you ever loved someone or something so hard, that you couldn’t imagine a life without him or that? Yes? I feel the same. So Consequently, for everyone is something else important. We all hope, that we never be in this situation.
Morgen mündliche Englisch Realschulprüfung, Text Korrektur
Hallo, ich habe morgen meine mündliche Realschulprüfung. Wir haben heute die Aufgabe für die Kurzpresentation(2-3min.) bekommen und wollte eure Meinung wissen. Es geht um ,,My Dream Job,, Hier ist der Text: My dream job Now I will tell you something about my dream job. My dream is to be a police officer because the uniform gives me strength. When I was a child I always wanted to arrest criminals to secure the city. I had three weeks internship at the police station and it was very interesting. So I can imagine to work as a cop. There are many departments in this job. Once the police protection, second the criminal police and finally the district police. The police protection has many interesting activities. They are called to inserts, to traffic accidents but anyway it is very dangerous because they arrest criminals. The criminal police is also an interesting department. They consult witnesses, they consult victims of crime, write reports and they are civil. That’s very important so they are not recognized by the criminals. The district police is something for older cops because they don’t have much action. They attend schools and speak with the pupils. That is not a thing for me. I want to work more at the police protection because it is very interesting. In this job you can earn about 2000 € a month. But it also can increase. That was my presentation about my dream job.